Thank you for the input on Chapter 1. I am planning to rework some of the chapters once I've completed up to chapter 10. At the time of writing that chapter I just had an idea of what I wanted the story to be. I knew what I wanted the tone to be and had ideas for some of the characters. I don't really know what I'm going to write until I actually start writing and get into the grove of the story. This comment was extremely helpful in realizing what I could do to make the chapter better. I hope that you keep reading.

Thanks for the advice I'll be sure to check out that line and others