I hadn't finished talking about Superman... then the fact that he's not really a brother could bring more depth to their relationships later, Zod could also without being used to pit the two against each other other by saying for example "why didn't the Els save the mc's parents" or even make zod a real cousin of the mc and try to make clarck doubt the possible betrayal of his brother... with just a change full of story possibilities opens up.

what changes is that it's not directly Superman's brother like all the other fanfiction, the nuances matter for a reader who has already read the same type of story 15 times

why necessarily a brother, it could be another family who had the same idea following the remarks made by jor el, or jor el saves the baby of a friend in addition to kara and says that the two will be sent like brothers

il meurt en sauvant sa petite mais il est maléfique dans sa nouvelle vie O_O

futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa futa

I give my opinion, whether you are interested or not, if you only prefer kisscool opinions too bad for you

why do you look surprised? I react to what you write, whether it is the synopsis or the chapters. How do you expect yourself to be hyper by a story that you denigrate yourself. and yes I'm not a fan of the stories with crazy zombies in TWD because you make the same mistake as many thinking that it's the zombies who are interesting, but the zombies are only secondary. It's humans and their interaction in survival that is interesting.

Il y a deja un alex dans l'equipe, alors ont fais comment ? alex1 alex2 ? Il y a deja un alex dans l'equipe, alors ont fais comment ? alex1 alex2 ?

L'auteur ne connais quasiment rien a TWD, nous fais un mc cheaté, avec des ajout de zombie modifier... nan ca va être super c'est évident.

je prefere les isekai ou les reincarnation. je prefere les isekai ou les reincarnation. je prefere les isekai ou les reincarnation. je prefere les isekai ou les reincarnation.

je déteste tout ce qui est scp, de plus le caractère du mc n'est pas bon. je déteste tout ce qui est scp, de plus le caractère du mc n'est pas bon.

매우 감사합니다

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mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles

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Merci pour le chapitre

Why do you want people to trust you, when you stop publishing around the thirty chapter mark. and it's not even like you did bad things, on the contrary I really like two of your publications. and I'm extremely disappointed that you stopped updating.

Je ne vais pas lire car le synopsis ne me plait pas, mais comme c'est un auteur Français, je soutiens :D VIVE LA FRANCE, AU CHIOTTE LES JEUX OLYMPIQUES, ONT PASSE POUR DES IDIOTS