Khian_Knight
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Khian_Knight11mthReplied to Asherou7"Why are you being so harsh? Are you jealous because I have these?" Captain Bron retorted, pointing at his legs.- Khian_Knight11mthReplied to Asherou7
Yeah, It goes like that
"Fuck your pride and heroic words!" Captain Bron said. - Khian_Knight11mthReplied to SliverLanceCh 12 CHAPTER 12- THE MEMORIES
- Khian_Knight11mthReplied to Asherou7Ch 33 CHAPTER 33- A Poignant Tale
- Khian_Knight11mthReplied to Asherou7Ch 34 CHAPTER 34- Welcoming Soldiers
- Khian_Knight1yrReplied to SliverLance
Don't you worry it will not affects the future chapters.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Khian_Knight1yrReplied to SliverLanceCh 13 CHAPTER 13 - ATTACK ON THE RESEARCH FACILITY
- Khian_Knight1yrReplied to SliverLanceCh 14 CHAPTER 14- ESCAPE
- Khian_Knight1yrReplied to SliverLanceCh 6 CHAPTER 6- STRANGERS
- Khian_Knight1yrReplied to SliverLanceCh 6 CHAPTER 6- STRANGERS
- Khian_Knight1yrCommentedNing Shi suddenly felt a chill in his head. It was as if he had been cut by a sharp knife. His head was empty as if something was missing.
- Khian_Knight1yrCommentedThis game was very strange. The icon was a black figure meditating and practicing.
- Khian_Knight1yrCommented
In the sentence, "who" is used as the object of the verb "were", which is incorrect as "who" is the subject form of the pronoun. Instead, "whom" should be used as it is the objective form of the pronoun.
Two guys, who were her old classmates were standing at the front door. They were in charge of the guests who were arriving. They smiled and welcomed Lola warmly when they saw her "Oh! Lola, it's good to see you again. Hurry up to the lobby bar on the third floor, that's where everyone is waiting." - Khian_Knight1yrCommented
Under the dark, gloomy night sky, a young boy walked down the street, haunted by the phrase "Our relationship isn't important" repeating in his mind. It always made him feel sad or angry, but tonight it made him even more depressed, which was unusual for him.
Under the dark gloomy night sky , a young boy walked down the sidewalk as the sentence 'Our relationship isn't Important' played over and over in his mind. It was never a phrase that didn't make him sad or angry. It actually made him more depressed. and it was unusual for him to feel that way. - Khian_Knight1yrCommented
There is a double negative in the sentence "it was never a phrase that didn't make him sad or angry." The use of "never" and "didn't" together creates a negative, making the sentence difficult to understand. It would be better to rephrase it as "It always made him feel sad or angry, but tonight it made him even more depressed, which was unusual for him."
Under the dark gloomy night sky , a young boy walked down the sidewalk as the sentence 'Our relationship isn't Important' played over and over in his mind. It was never a phrase that didn't make him sad or angry. It actually made him more depressed. and it was unusual for him to feel that way. - Khian_Knight1yrReplied to PrettySerenityCh 4 CHAPTER 4- Why am i in the Hospital?
- Khian_Knight1yrReplied to SeraphWedd"I know, that's why I thought it would be a great surprise for you. You're going to love the view up there!"
- Khian_Knight1yrReplied to Ekwonna_Irene
Yeah, You're right , due to bad system
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