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hashmolla0019mthReplied to Aj_SaundersCh 25 Memories- hashmolla0019mthReplied to IJUSTWANTTODIE
- hashmolla00110mthReplied to Homelander69
Isn't Grammarly an AI language program? but well about the mc it is hard to explain his past life but there will be a whole arc about it ... I remember it was chapter 88 to 93
Suddenly, an insatiable hunger assailed him, as if he had starved for days on end. "My head feels light, and the pangs of hunger are overwhelming. It appears I have lost copious amounts of blood and languished in this dark abyss for an extended period. This hunger, it seems, was the very trial the child sought to partake in." - hashmolla00110mthReplied to AirTheTruth
no, it is not, and even if the author forgets some small details … he must remember and be careful in introducing new characters + the mc is kind-hearted simp .. from the ever beginning despite how he suffered in the past life which must make him more mature but nooo he get kidnapped in the first ever moment he leave his parents ... that is one of many points i can mention like wtf man you just completely destroy and crush your original mothers life but you completely forget about her and start treating another women as your mother that is a sign of hypocrisy for me
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- hashmolla00111mthReplied to EfrinnCh 18 Bloodlines
- hashmolla00111mthReplied to Majestical_potato
done ... better now ?
This paragraph has been deleted. - hashmolla00111mthReplied to venerable_jade
yes but not all of the names in the novel Chinese
Further to the right, one of the four girls stood. She had an average appearance, with a fair oval face. The name displayed in front of her was Putong Megwai, meaning "common rose." - hashmolla00111mthReplied to EfrinnCh 5 Completion of Equipment and Improvement of Poison Effects
- hashmolla00111mthReplied to EfrinnCh 2 The Struggle Within the Darkness
- hashmolla00111mthReplied to hashmolla001
and before you ask yes I am the original author and the translator ..
Suddenly, an insatiable hunger assailed him, as if he had starved for days on end. "My head feels light, and the pangs of hunger are overwhelming. It appears I have lost copious amounts of blood and languished in this dark abyss for an extended period. This hunger, it seems, was the very trial the child sought to partake in." - hashmolla00111mthReplied to GifflarGod
yes it is his thoughts ... and why the writing way is weird it is because i translate this novel from my own language ... in Arabic it is not that weird to describe things this way . after all of this i use Grammarly to correct and find better ways to phrase everything .. in the end enjoy the novel and thank you for commenting
Suddenly, an insatiable hunger assailed him, as if he had starved for days on end. "My head feels light, and the pangs of hunger are overwhelming. It appears I have lost copious amounts of blood and languished in this dark abyss for an extended period. This hunger, it seems, was the very trial the child sought to partake in."