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Chriser_Kenny10hReplied to DaoistnrKflMThat is why I put "?" at end just in case I was wrong. if I am sure I will end the sentence with "." thank you for the correction
The four of them chuckled and stepped away. That was when I realized that I was being carried in Liu Yu Zeng's arms. The men were walking towards the front gate, the rest of our men following behind us. "We had plans to hunt for supplies while you were out, but you woke up too soon," admitted Liu Wei as he adjusted the leather gloves on his hands. "However, that can change if you need it to."- Chriser_Kenny8dCommentedCh 120 Chapter 120 Shotgun Wedding?
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thank God this is fiction. Tiger and wolf can't have babies. wolf and fox or dog. cat can with other felines not canines.
Like father, like son, this little one's dad was a wolf, so it was normal for it to howl like one. - Chriser_Kenny14dCommented
why do you keep calling biological mother, stepmother? this is wrong 😕
The stepmother had forgotten about the past, and all she could remember was probably what happened after she joined Qian's third wife. In her heart, Qian Manjiang was her dearest person, her children were her most loved ones, Qian Sangui's couple and Qian Xiaqian were the people she cared about the most; she could not bear to see any of them get hurt. - Chriser_Kenny17dCommented
I think you mean "three years oldER" three years old is toddler. three years older mean 3 years later in time.
Su Hua laughed. He held Sun Baoqian's hand and rubbed her fingers with his fingers. He said softly, "Qianqian, you're still too young. It's very difficult to have children. When you're three years old, it won't be too late for us to have a child." - Chriser_Kenny17dCommented
sounds like grouper.
Su Xiaolu really did not know what kind of fish this was. It took many days to travel from Wuzhou, Qinghai, to the capital. It had to be preserved by ice, but this fish did not have any fishy smell. - Chriser_Kenny18dCommented
isn't Yixiu the granddaughter? why is she calling her grandpa, husband? did I get the names wrong?
Qian Yixiu discussed with Qian Sangui, "Husband, we can no longer tolerate the Xu family; we must find a way to deal with them. Otherwise, they might bite us when we least expect it, and that would be terrifying." - Chriser_Kenny19dCommented
wounds NOT scars. she just created them mother should be wounds. scars are created after the scabs come off. scars last longer than wounds.
It had only been 30 minutes, and Ben En had scars everywhere. - Chriser_Kenny19dCommented
Lui is male. he cannot be niece-in-law. males can only be nephews and nephew-in-law.
Madam Yin heard Liu Zijin's persuasion and had a better impression of this niece-in-law. - Chriser_Kenny20dReplied to LadybirdFly
minimum is 2 catties, but they get paid more. to punish them it should be one coin for 2 catties = 1/2 coin per catty. that is better punishment
Su Sanlang's expression was calm as he said to Old Master Wang, "Grand Duke, I was willing to buy it from the village because I had feelings for them. However, they went back on their word and didn't care about our feelings. Now, they want to sell it to me again. I can actually refuse to buy it, but if they're willing to sell it, I'm willing to pay three copper coins for two catties. If they think the price is low, then forget it." - Chriser_Kenny20dCommentedCh 135 Anesthesia
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sitting is verb, not a noun.
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you cannot used Korean grammar format with English grammar. your current English grammar is similar to country bumpkin.
"Why does she have to give him a hard time now? She's no more the obedient lover girl she was before." Hwang Yu-jin thought angrily made a call talked to someone for 3 minutes and hung up the call. - Chriser_Kenny21dCommented
if you are raised in English speaking country, your language arts grades must be bad. if you are from non-English speaking country, you need better English editor.
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there are excess words that make the sentence sound off. your grammar is off.
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why are you calling biological father, stepfather ? just because he act like one does not make him one.
Daohua heard their conversation, took another glance at those fawning over their stepfather, let down the carriage curtain, sat next to Yan Wenkai, and whispered, "Fourth Brother, who irritated you?" - Chriser_Kenny22dCommented
you have such good storyline, but your grammar really ruins it. do better
Justin covered his face and peeped at his father through small gaps in his eyes. - Chriser_Kenny22dCommented
good comeback dad
"Maybe you should all stop hogging my daughter." Dorian joined the four who were standing around in a circle idly looking at the exit of the stadium. - Chriser_Kenny24dCommented
when do males produce milk from their breast? "lactating" are you realllllly sure 🤔
That day, Xue Shi and Xue Bai were lactating strangely… They even followed them to the street where their family's main shop was located… That night, the rest of the family was in the hall, and Xue Shi kept looking around as if waiting for something to happen. There was no one else on that street that he was familiar with to visit… Except for Shen Yuxuan? So, what did Xue Shi and the others tell Shen Yuxuan that day? - Chriser_Kenny24dCommented
Feng Zhiju is the "female" lead. proper pronouns are she and her. NOT "his" which is male pronoun.
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