These first chapters have managed to move me, I will continue to follow it the story is very intriguing. I hope new chapters will come soon.

I have never considered stories with magicians and spies mixed together, it is something interesting and so far I like the way the story is developing. I hope in the next chapters to find something about the world of Mc, I would like some more developments. I will continue reading.

Thank you for the advice, I am trying to improve my English and I hope to bring my writing to an acceptable level.

my first tip is: don't be put off by the longer opening chapter. the reading is smooth and the world presented has many interesting details. I'm not particularly fond of books in 1st pov, but for now (I've only read the first two chapters) the author is handling it well. Given the slow pace, however, I would have preferred a more detailed construction of the village and its family, perhaps dedicating the entire first chapter to it. Overall an interesting read, I will definitely continue to follow the story hoping it stays on these levels.