Na minha opinião, você escreve bem autor , sua introdução de personagen e média junto a do mundo , você e melhor do que a maioria , e deve se orgulhar disso
I understand, I'm trying to develop a story slowly but I don't know which way to go, so sorry for the inconvenience and take all the time you need to think, we'll be waiting
An interesting and captivating story, with good dialogue and history in terms of potential, but I sincerely ask you not to forget the other work, my life as a monster