Yeah, she should go and die. I mean, why don't this kind of characters stay at home and stop causing trouble for people, usually needing rescue. What is a 14 year old business looking for Ice Lilies in that Great Forest, and into its depth too. Who sent you? Who begged you? She should just die, and not try acting cute and clingy with the MC.

For my first point about inappropriately putting female characters in almost every position, I was trying to emphasize on how it disrupts certain things, and makes some of the plot illogical or weird (I don't know a better word to use)

I feel like I should just say this here, although some people might label it misogynistic. I feel like most authors this days, excluding CN authors who do such stuff 'normally', utilize their 🍆s while writing. Look at books like Global Awakening I got an SSS level Library system, Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder and so many more, you realize that most character roles are being inappropriately assigned to female characters. Yeah, nothing's 'wrong' with it especially the Global one, since it isn't that serious, but I believe that when a teacher and student start being too intimate, that relationship is no longer teacher-student, and the respect or reverence won't be the same. I am not gonna talk about the Apocalypse one were MC outrightly said that men shouldn't come into his shelter - that's where I stopped. I believe all this are caused because authors just keep placing characters in place, so that the MC can plough their holes or find a new romantic relationship. The whole kind of feels off, especially to me who uses logical thinking when reading original and non-chinese books (that is original works made on webnovel platform). Also there's the ones about females being leaders in various high positions, which isn't inappropriate if done correctly, but then, you the reader, realize that they all later had relationships and seggs with the MC in the future, or later joined his harem, which this isn't the main reason I'm pissed. I am pissed at the fact that in most of this books, the female leaders, elders and ancient beings, all adopted or have a youthful and beautiful appearance or body, but if it were a male elder, or leader, or ancient being, they always or mostly adopt elderly and old and wrinkled appearance, with most of them being hunch-backed. Does that seem logical or reasonable to you? If the female elders could maintain their youthful appearances from cultivating, with the note that elders are usually very talented geniuses or prodigies from previous generations, then, the males should be talented enough to be able to cultivate and retain his youthful appearance. There are many more vexes of mine, but I feel like I've 'yapped' enough.

I'm calling this book for what it is, Cliché and cringey. I literally almost entered the book to fight this Feng Chen guy. Also considering that I literally predicted almost all his actions. If I knew it was a translated Chinese novel, I wouldn't be this vexed, but I started the book thinking it was an original work on webnovel.

Bro, a person without a core, regardless of the fact that they are strategists, can't go to a war of such level, not to talk of surviving it.

I don't know but I feel like he should have added his own wager that could significantly benefit him, and not just obediently accept Oscar's wager

🤨... I can't be bothered to argue with someone who doesn't get the point of my comment 😒

Well, actually, people who can shamelessly and boldly say such things do exist. Came across quite a number of such people boldly stating it in podcasts from "UTube" shorts. Quite surprising, right?

Then, it should be specified and not bringing reader's expectations high with the word "anything" that the MC asked for.

Purchase it from the system, I thought the system was meant to sell everything including talents and houses, cultivation energy or mana, food, if not, then the author should clarify it, after all, the MC requested for a system shop were he could buy literally anything with the money he conjured. So in a sense, the MC can solely survive off of the countless resources from the system; based on the wide scope covered by the word "anything", he should be able to buy cultivation levels, talents, slaves, houses or secret realms, and so on, not to talk of mere ID.

Really ? A demon "empress" bloodline for a male demon? I believe "emperor" sounds suitable

I don't like how the powerful E-rank skill was replaced, I feel like he got nerfed for no reason 🤔😞

With the large number of webnovels I've read, it's hard for me to believe that this goddess doesn't have a hand in their death 🧐. Also looks suspicious, her saying that she doesn't mean any harm. Does that mean that she could resurrect any of them who died during the period they spent saving her world, if not, I'd also like to believe that you definitely mean harm to them.

I thought the title — Merciless Hunter got upgraded to E

No... Personally, I feel that their current situation shouldn't call for such prolonged twists and turns; he should have at least gone a bit straight to the point, instead he kept talking in riddles and stuff. Think about it logically, if it were in real life, you might not (even I) have the patience to keep listening to such riddle-like, twists and turns, conversation. Although the information he fed her at the beginning might be important, they weren't needed at that moment; he should've gotten a bit straight to the point, and later on break things down for her. But remember, all these are just minor mistakes, nothing serious😉

I see some people in the comment being like, "As far as there was a good reason for her to break up with him, then, that's okay". Reading this paragraph, I rushed to go and skim through later chapters, and yeah, I believe they got back together. A relationship that was built through the targeted and imposed influence of the female's parents, even if she later came to truly love him, can't be that strong. I think it was revealed in a certain chapter later that the parents threatened her to break up the relationship, and only after Allen saved her from a serious accident and danger, revealing his strength, did the parents and the girl agree to reunite the relationship. In my opinion, regardless of how she was threatened, can't she find a way to convey the message across to Allen, stating the reason for such event to take place; and that is if she truly loves him, cos if it was in real life, I would like to believe that that Emma girl is vicious and cunning. She purposely didn't want to convey a good reason for the unofficial breakup, allowing the Allen guy to wallow in sorrow. I believe that this is a slip up in author's skill, writing from the author's perspective and not from the character's POV. Because, if she truly loves him, she could request for a final moment with him from her parents, regardless of the threat, after all they can't kill their own daughter or take too extreme actions like killing Allen, which could probably affect their daughter's mental health, and end things on an official note. But no, she didn't, probably to leave a loophole to reenter the relationship in the future, if needed. Unless the MC is a simp, then no reason can justify her actions. I just wanted to rant about this, cos I feel that this book has been a good one so far, greatly disappoints me with this plot mistake .

Alright, thanks for the clarification. Almost panicked, cos I've never experienced such happenings since I started using the app.

Hey, author, am really confused about something. Waking up today, and upon opening my app messages, I saw that this new book of yours, which I didn't know about, had its New Book Alert made by my account.I am confused by such happening. Clarify my thoughts, if its a normal occasion, and something not to panic about. Also, my telling me why it happened ?

Because of a certain bug in the app, I can't type comments through the normal method, so I had to type it here; after all I couldn't bear to follow the solution suggested by a certain worker at the customer service — Clearing my cache, with a possibility of my downloaded stories and saved novels being cleared - I hope someone gives me a better solution. As for my comment... In a certain paragraph it was said that live streaming was better than recorded video. In my opinion, such method isn't 100% user friendly. Lets forget about the MC who has his identity hidden; imagine an ordinary awakener, by a struck of luck, encounters a big secret or opportunity, or an incredibly valuable loot dropped by a monster; like a Mythical kind of weapon. In such situation won't his sudden wealth be exposed and might even attract unnecessary troubles like assassinations and oppression from the government. If it was an opportunity that might increase his strength, or serve as a hidden card, won't it loose its value as a secret or hidden card. Just saying my thoughts 🤷... A nice and interesting book so far

Too low for that level of risks 🤔