Mika Elbar's adventure in this magical tale breaks away from typical hero stories. His down-to-earth nature makes him a likable main character, and the mysterious systen adds suspense to the plot. The famous magic academy, Loogam, adds excitement to Mika's journey. The fact that he lacks typical magical abilities or legendary relics makes his underdog story more compelling. Pretty good start to the story. Let's go Aspiring Mangakas community!

The author's vivid descriptions and evocative language make this story a must-read, capturing the essence of a love so deep it can't escape a tragic fate.

The world of fallen angels and demons is an interesting one. The MC is weak but strong in resolve, that makes him sympathetic. The MC and his bully first get into a fight, then they duel. It's feels a bit repetitive. Maybe they should just duel from the start?Intriquing story so far. Keep up the good work!

This review is after readin 3 chapter:The MC is thrown into a dark place right away by a double betrayal, so we feel much empathy for him right away. This gives him a proper motivation that we can follow along in this story.After reincarnating a thousand year later, the reader is curious how he will take his revenge.Very great start to a gripping revenge story. Keep up the good work!

Only read 3 chapter so far. The MC trusted into the story strongla in the first chapter. The world building is greatly done with good writing. Only problem for me after 3 chapter, that we don't get a clear motivatio on the MC goal other than he wants to heal himself and survive.Otherwise it is a great start for an interesting story with unique elements, and a not generic MC. Keep up the good work!

The MC is an interesting one with clear goals. The world is well built out, but at the start a reader might be confused by so much information.