The world of fallen angels and demons is an interesting one. The MC is weak but strong in resolve, that makes him sympathetic. The MC and his bully first get into a fight, then they duel. It's feels a bit repetitive. Maybe they should just duel from the start?Intriquing story so far. Keep up the good work!
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