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Iām not talking about the backgroundsā¦ I mean the plot, every chapter reminds of a plot Iāve read countless times.ā¦ all plots in the novel have been used too many times in different novels that it becomes generic or clichĆ©ā¦ thereās nothing surprising at all, you can literally guess the end of a plot at the beginningā¦(well no romance or harem tag so itās bearable)
Sheās tryna lay claim to Pablo as her ākingā she feels so naive, Pablo might just use her and get rid of her when sheās useless,so she wonāt be a threat. just from a little observation Pablo has already known her character while she knows nothing, even her angel doesnāt. And I donāt think Pablo is the type to be someoneās ākingā or even consider someone his equal. so Iām sure sheās just gonna be his pawnā¦ a disposable pawn. Well Iāll leave it to you author to prove me wrong or rightā¦ waiting for updates!!!!š
Youāre rightā¦ the nano machine has the ability copy and analyze moves, but the mc might not be able to use them if he does not have the force qi to perform it, i.e demonic force qi or ice force qi. (But he can analyze it to search for the weaknesses or use it as a reference to create a new martial art) but itās not possible for the mc to be helpless before the protagonist, the mc has ādivine talentā which means he can analyze martial arts too and create one easily, infact the talent is beyond comprehension. So as the nano machine copies and analyze hus moves, he is doing so too and to everyone. the rule of not killing the protagonist just makes things interesting.ā¦
I donāt only dislike tang san but I dislike all seven of the shrek devils and everyone associated with them. But if you ask who I hate the most, it will be xiao wuā¦ anybody with a decent amount of iQ can see that sheās incredibly stupid; I mean gaining human form and leaving home just to fall in love with a human, the same humans who kills the soul beastās she so much loves. like wtf š¤¬ who does that, a normal person put in her position will be planning revenge or at least trying to stop the massacre of her race, but she was busy having fun with the same soul masters who hunt them down. Such a stupid and naĆÆve character is supposed to die.(well itās impossible with plot amor) The reason I dislike tang san is not because heās wrong or something like that, it just because to me he is too emotional and I find it hard to connect with over emotional characters, the only feeling I have for him is disdain.
I would suggest you stay and build a world properly instead of world hopping every few chapters and properly introduce the system and his cheat, make full use of them and not waste the potential and give a highlight on what kind of person the mc is, as itās a villain tag then just introduce his character like what a villain supposed to be, not some second or third rate villain though, I mean A REAL VILLIAN one who acts on his interests without considering anyone and with no justification for his actions; it should simply be āI wanted it and I got/did it or itās within my interests and beneficial to me" And give the mc a goal e.g strength above all, strength while doing whatever I want, or to do whatever I want. A personal advise: donāt go PokĆ©mon(harem) or spoil it with romance and donāt make him a simpā¦. study about the world the mc will travel to before writing about it. Goodluck š Will give it a try to check for improvements.
I donāt agree with you on thatā¦ Thereās more purpose in the mcās existence than killing the protagonist. Like he could do whatever he wants since he has the power, world domination and many other goals to achieveā¦. Only when his existence is all based on killing the protagonist that it becomes boring because once he achieves that, he loses his sense of existence and the story becomes bland.