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The novel has no plot or even a description of the mc, his character, goal or anything at all…overall it’s just messy.
Apotheosis:Devourer
KingOfCultivation
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I would suggest you stay and build a world properly instead of world hopping every few chapters and properly introduce the system and his cheat, make full use of them and not waste the potential and give a highlight on what kind of person the mc is, as it’s a villain tag then just introduce his character like what a villain supposed to be, not some second or third rate villain though, I mean A REAL VILLIAN one who acts on his interests without considering anyone and with no justification for his actions; it should simply be ”I wanted it and I got/did it or it’s within my interests and beneficial to me" And give the mc a goal e.g strength above all, strength while doing whatever I want, or to do whatever I want. A personal advise: don’t go Pokémon(harem) or spoil it with romance and don’t make him a simp…. study about the world the mc will travel to before writing about it. Goodluck 👍 Will give it a try to check for improvements.
KingOfCultivation:Any suggestions on how to improve these things?
Demon_Cultivator_:I would suggest you stay and build a world properly instead of world hopping every few chapters and properly introduce the system and his cheat, make full use of them and not waste the potential and give a highlight on what kind of person the mc is, as it’s a villain tag then just introduce his character like what a villain supposed to be, not some second or third rate villain though, I mean A REAL VILLIAN one who acts on his interests without considering anyone and with no justification for his actions; it should simply be ”I wanted it and I got/did it or it’s within my interests and beneficial to me" And give the mc a goal e.g strength above all, strength while doing whatever I want, or to do whatever I want. A personal advise: don’t go Pokémon(harem) or spoil it with romance and don’t make him a simp…. study about the world the mc will travel to before writing about it. Goodluck 👍 Will give it a try to check for improvements.
