Undeadwizard7
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Only rewrite the story if you absolutely hate the path your story will have to go down to continue it. I really like what you have here and think it is fine but in the end, its your choice and we will just have to deal with it. listen to others advice but make your own choices. whatever you choose, we will still be here waiting for the next chapter.
I meant the duration. even if dragons have bigger lungs they shouldn't be able to breath fire indefinitely...
in the future I plan to send them to other universes.
that would be Malkor, Sauron was his lieutenant.
I was thinking that Urgals are just an offshoot of orc that live in the deserts with the Easterlings.
elves leave middle earth when they want to die i am pretty sure. the elves in Eragon could just be some of them that had forsaken their immortality only for their children to acquire their high lifespan from the dragons.
yea, so in my improvised lore it will be dwarves were born from stone in middle earth and in Alagaesia, i kind of want these dragons to be separate from middle earth's seeing as the middle earth ones were made by Malkor and are inherently evil. I will just have humans, elves, urgals, and Razac come from the west.
He went super Saiyan blue for a moment there... For real though, I will explain that caveat later. Varaug is a foe that Eragon had zero chance of defeating, it took a max power Eragon and Arya to kill him when he was not fully summoned and was unused to his new body. He could have single handedly killed the entire Varden with how strong this version of him is. And I love the fact that I can make the protagonist's actions have consequences of this magnitude. but please. keep telling me if you find something strange, I am not perfect and appreciate your feedback.
it was that if the rider dies, the dragon will commit seppuku in grief. I find the notion quite stupid as well.
Come on! have some more faith... at least twice a year.
it makes me so sad to hear that. I thought the stone sword was fun and interesting. Maybe i can go all john wick and have him make a pencil just to annoy you guys. tee hee!!!