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2022-12-23 JoinedIndia
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  • Evil_Avatar
    Evil_Avatar3mth
    Replied to Unit29

    Hey buddy! Don't kill my novel just yet.

    Ch 47 Small Announcement for this week
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    Evil_Avatar4mth
    Replied to Jnc509

    Thank you so much!

    Ch 44 Chapter 42: Another Academy
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    Evil_Avatar4mth
    Replied to Kaden_Stapleton

    Thank you! Is the writing okay? I am worried about the writing part as I am not a native english speaker and only learned in school. I learned writing using only novels.

    Ch 33 Chapter 31: Revelations (Part-3)
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    Evil_Avatar4mth
    Replied to Kaden_Stapleton

    [img=Good night]

    Ch 28 Chapter 26: Aftermath
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    Evil_Avatar4mth
    Replied to Daoist_Large_Slong

    Thank you for the feedback. I will add an auxiliary chapter and will keep it in mind for future.

    Ch 4 Chapter 3: Orientation (Part 1)
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    Evil_Avatar4mth
    Replied to Kaden_Stapleton

    Thank you so much! I am getting a gist of this.

    Ch 26 Chapter 24: Training and Trouble Again (Part-2)
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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to Kaden_Stapleton

    Of course! They will spend good and bad times to understand relationship. Thank you for reading!

    Ch 22 Chapter 20: The Date and The Trouble (Part-2)
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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to Kaden_Stapleton

    Thank you so much!

    Ch 21 Chapter 19: The Date and The Trouble
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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to Anmol_Gupta_8769

    Thank you so much for your generous support!

    Ch 21 Chapter 19: The Date and The Trouble
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    Evil_Avatar5mth
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    Hey guys! This is my first novel and I would love if you give it a try. This novel will certainly be entertaining with a great MC and world development! Thank you for your time!

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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to MonicaLsk

    Thank you so much for the support!

    Ch 3 Chapter 2: Academy
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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to HouseOfLee

    Thank you so much!

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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to Visionary_M

    Thank you so much for support!

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  • Evil_Avatar
    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Prologue: Part 1-4
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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Posted

    The story is promising and looks interesting. I enjoyed the interactions and the flow of the story, especially those extended lines really makes the reading interesting. My only suggestion would be to further develop the depths of the characters. Keep up the good work!

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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Commented

    This chapter sets the tone for the future pretty amazingly!

    Ch 7 The Sage of the Forest
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  • Evil_Avatar
    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Posted

    I was sold on the synopsis. The premise is interesting and I characters have substance. I believe, given the premise, your novel will rely on the world building and development a lot so I hope you will keep put thoughts on that area. Keep up the good work.

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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to Hartika_Sharma

    Haha I am sure you will not be disappointed. Thank you for supporting!

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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to XenaReigns_1

    Thank you for supporting!

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    Evil_Avatar5mth
    Replied to zingertje_123

    Thank you so much for encouraging words! I am sure you will get better at writing in no time.

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