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The story is promising and looks interesting. I enjoyed the interactions and the flow of the story, especially those extended lines really makes the reading interesting. My only suggestion would be to further develop the depths of the characters. Keep up the good work!
Mystery of the Whispering Grove
MonicaLsk
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Thank you for your feedback! đ I'm thrilled you found the story promising and enjoyed the interactions. I totally agree that character development is crucial, and I'm actively working on delving deeper into the characters to make the story even more engaging. Your support means a lot, and I'll keep doing my best to improve the narrative. Stay tuned for more exciting developments in the upcoming chapters! đđ