i actually like the idea of naruto tossed there in dxd and all but you nerfed him too much, way too much that his level seems to drop back when he start training with jiraya. ironic how you did him that bad while giving him all those cheats like the rinnegan and the yin yang seal, all the six paths powered and all biju yet he still find it hard to fight a bunch of nobodies from the hero faction. and worse he almost lost in speed battle, like really bro? it would be much interesting if you didn't nerfed him and made him a softie that sona and rias can bark on him as they want. or if madara was there in his stead . overall i enjoyed the first 20 ch until the fight with that persus guy when he nearly kill naruto and ^surprised^ him with speed lol. best luck for your next work bro keep trying.

i agree with what you just said but take a moment and search for antares. his power level, what have he done on the novel, manhwa....after that imagine if that mad man was here. swapped with single move? bruh i'm sure he'll go after great red directly to prove why he is called ^dragon monarch^ where i can't tell the outcome i'm sure he'll survive. now that man himself found himself in troubles when sung jinwoo got after his ass in the dimensional gap chasing after him and his ^dragons^ like crazy. and now he have milions of shadows. that man in dxd? well they would be fuc*ed up if he ddecide t's just right to go against the whole wworld s in dxd he have nothing to lose but everything to take. just my opinion tho.

chill up bro summon are for dirty works...you can't bother with small fries that's what your summon are for, that's my opinion for sure

i got you bro but i just can't come to like her even if you guys saw (yandere potential) in her like if you re-read carefully you'll find that the only reason she didn't have s*x with that guy is just because the mc enter the room(she was top naked and kissing while waiting for him to pen*etrate her and in her pov she said it clearly that she enjoyed his touch...) well my point is that the mc has many pure girl that loved him dearly so there's no point for her to be in his life again as a lover.except that maybe some poeple here don't mind such a messed up situation like this one and are fine with someone like her as a partner

maybe it's the overall power? i doubt it's just pure strength but then again i can expect everything from this

what is this about?just a bored man asking here

so much for a guy who's wife cheats on him in the past... when you try that pain i don't believe any normal guy would do the same to another man who did him good(let his wife take care of him without any complain and with his own money) the point is his personality in the first ch and now is way different.and no way any woman would accept someone telling her to let him bang her that fast

oh i see bro, i mean no offense i just found it weird how clingy he was to ayano lol

umm is it me or the mc is acting more like ayanokoji's girlfriend more than a bro.it just feel weird when he tried to satisfy him with do you want that koji-kun... koji-kun this

i like your ideas. the way how your character behave and how he didn't follow the plot like most fanfics there or became the lackey of ayanokoji or simply taking his actions before him is wonderful( i love ayanokoji character and respect him but when reading a fanfic i would prefer an interesting individual mc like our friend tatsuya here). and despite not liking his way of doing things(r*pe and the like) i really enjoyed how he didn't give a dam* about what others think and used every mean to reach his goal(banging lol)...overall i didn't expect to enjoy this much especially the drop arc.we need MOAAAR chapters

bro.....really now?

author bro you are one big cuck out there to make such a thing.that's just a beta cuck life drama

the story is great but this kind of happy go lucky naive mc who supposed to be 40 yo with calculative mind isn't for me.heck he never bother to suspected what those so called gods tell him. just a yes madam naive guy

that was epic fight scene.thanks for the chapter

sung jinwoo would be disappointed if he hears u saying *just make an undead to take a hit instead of you* lol. necromencer is op and cool but i prefer a fighter mc who didn't hide behind his army. thanks for the chapter btw

he's too much whiny for someone who wants power. why not REALLY try to ccontrole he cursed energy instead of wasting time complaining to no one

i wrote a fu**ing article lol ranting here cuz i'm damn disappointed in myself for wasting so much time in this one just for author to pull something like that.unfortunately i don't have time otherwise i would like to wrote a fanfic with the (inner voice)thing without a failure like this mc

bruh it's your brain's circuit that is broken... they already hear issei intent in killing the guards outside and even though sona is devil she isn't that evil who let her people die like garbage out there yet she sit down with him and her parent eating and blushing like nothing happend?? okay here maybe you were confused but neg*a what about giving one of the op spells of anos to them like it's some candy...really? if it was that easy to master and being able to do it why won't anos make a freaking organisation just by giving whatever he can to his friends (women). and it really takes the term (special) from mc by doing that.just like how he's using shadow garden on something stupid...the point is this chapter up tell now was the worst and the most annoying.

...(fortunately ma boy can't read her mind)

bruuuh