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BenisBoy141dReplied to Wesley_HylryActually not. It's a title I took from Google images of an USA authored book.
The book is called 'EXTREME WILDERNESS SURVIVAL Essential Knowledge To Survive Any Outdoor Situation Short-Term or Long-Term, With Or Without Gear And Alone Or With Others' - By Professor Sylvana Hedera.- BenisBoy141dReplied to Jorge_Hernandez_3316Narrator:Not like that. Grow up.
- BenisBoy142dReplied to Lana12_Lana12
"Mission: Impossible" The movie. But MiSsANNE is almost pronounced like Mission.
MiSsANNE Impossible - BenisBoy142dCommented
(don't mention how much I'm reaching with that title 😭 )
MiSsANNE Impossible - BenisBoy142dReplied to Quake_Midaro
Kind of agree, kinda disagree too. I want to have some of that "cheerful anime journey" to be a big aspect of the fic. This is escapism after all. And escaping from our real hell to a fictional hell doesn't feel very escape-y to me xD Permanent injury and death still happens. Just not from everyday accidents. I feel like the fic would need to turn more into "Master of Tactics" if the characters needed to constantly worry about death. The way it is now, major consequences can only happen from major events.
Gloom is KO and the guy whose face I turned into meat-scraps... He's just KO too? ... Ah, right. I forgot. Humans became more durable and are stronger than animals now. - BenisBoy147dReplied to NightroPulse
A self-insert is when the character is the author. Nothing to do with 1st or 2nd person. This is a reader-insert because it's written in a way in which the reader is supposed to identify as the MC. I personally believe that 1st person is better for that effect than y/n or other styles. But none of this matters. It's a good fic. And it's long enough to get used to the writing style.
Hey there. Some readers will only look at the tags to decide what they read. - BenisBoy147dReplied to NightroPulse
The synopsis is not part of the story. That 'you' is just to tell potential readers that the fic is a reader-insert. The narrator may use a stylistic 'you'. It could be replaced with the word 'one'. "Everywhere one looks, bla"
Hey there. Some readers will only look at the tags to decide what they read. - BenisBoy147dReplied to NightroPulse
Not sure if I understand your complaint correctly. Was it confusion about 1st/2nd POV? Or is it about reader-inserts being bad? Because I personally disagree with that. Reader-inserts are the most fun to read.
Hey there. Some readers will only look at the tags to decide what they read. - BenisBoy147dReplied to
It's using primarily "I"-POV (1st person). Never "You"-POV (2nd person). Sometimes "He"-POV (3rd person), for dramatic effects.
Hey there. Some readers will only look at the tags to decide what they read. - BenisBoy148dReplied to The_reader_ofnovel
Strong genes.
I get back to weighing Salandit. It's simple enough and she just lets me manhandle-- Ahem! Normally handle her without any issues. - BenisBoy1419dReplied to Quake_MidaroCh 35 90% (16 May 2024)
- BenisBoy141mthCommented
James Cameron is really "on the nose" with his naming. "Grace" - Good guy/woman ... "Selfridge" -Bad guy
"Him, and indeed… Parker Selfridge is not someone I particularly like at all, nobody here really does but me in particular. He is a businessman at heart, something he lacks, and the one with the reins.", she answered the unasked question of Liam with venom dripping out of her every word. - BenisBoy141mthReplied to JustJacky
Every character will get character-development sooner or later. Including the pokemon. If a character ends up 1-dimensional, I will have failed as an author. But her teasing and domineering/confrontational behavior will probably never fully leave. It just fits too well with what I have in mind for her personality.
Ch 28 Life goes on - BenisBoy141mthReplied to Magos_Dominus_8298
? Only the city is in crisis. Because there was just 1 route connecting Canalave City to the rest of the region.
Fresh drinking water and food are running out and a few people within the city are voicing their opinion openly to let the refugees starve because they need the food themselves. - BenisBoy141mthReplied to Magos_Dominus_8298
Nope. She's dirt poor and the rewards for 1st place in the tournament were a TM and a pokemon egg -> she wouldn't sell either of those for money.
160₽ in total. Her half of the cost would burn through all of her savings at once. - BenisBoy141mthReplied to Terminator1732Ch 35 90% (16 May 2024)
- BenisBoy141mthReplied to WolfBlade_5155
A fire would attract too much attention.
Why didn't my father give me a stupid lighter! Or anything else useful! Asshole! - BenisBoy142mthReplied to DaoistuMpk8FCh 34 Goodbye Canalave City