The beginning, the story thrusts some God into the mix, showcasing different realities, saying how cool it is, In reality it has absolutely zero relevance to the actual plot of the universe it's set in, It's nothing but a cheap gimmick to fill each chapter with dumb reactions from the characters. They stand around and comment on the appearance of some random character? "He's cute, he's unmanly" If the story centered around a strong and intelligent female protagonist, it might have been salvageable, But no, we get stuck on her brother a carbon copy of Midoriya, and some shy female side characters. And surprise, surprise, the protagonists are children just like any other fanfic. You have to go through a hundred chapters before they begin to grow up, and even then, they remain gullible heroes, The story is populated with characters, with names like "Izuko, Izumi, Mizuko, Katsuki, Itsuki," that trying to keep track of who's who becomes a chore, and honestly, I couldn't care about any of them, The transitions between the main story and these random realities are so poorly that is impossible to even tell when it's happening, There's absolutely nothing new or unique about this, since the plot itself is a rewrite of another, with the only addition being a character who starts off as bullied, but wants to pretend he is smart and can 'analyze' the heroes because he watches TV, but inevitably ends up becoming hero without a quirk using the power of friendship or some stuff like that. It's clear that the two main characters won't be good, subjected to endless chapters, and filler reaction level storyline.
Nartleb
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LIKEI was actually expecting it to be a well written "izuku villain" novel (i've seen some really good ones) but then i entered the first chapter... and i saw one of my most hated enemies, Reaction characters/ audience with some god.. literally had to go back to the description to see if i missed something(I did). I hate these novels because they remind me of the trashy wattpad ones
his taste aligns with mine thankfully everything he says is garbage is actually garbage when i give it a read
Holy_Sheep:I wouldn't fully trust this guy he seems to have a too harsh of an opinion he has like 1 fanfic i saw with five stars and all the others were 3,2,1 usually in that order
>Expects webnovel fanfics to have good quality >NOOOOOO THEY ARE JUST FANFICS YOU CANNOT COMPARE THEM TO CHINESE CLASSICS
Cat_Tip:Don’t even trust his judgment he takes the fanfic and compares it to a professionaly made novel he reviews everything and always has nothing good to say even on fanfics I love.
Magos_Dominus_8298:>Expects webnovel fanfics to have good quality >NOOOOOO THEY ARE JUST FANFICS YOU CANNOT COMPARE THEM TO CHINESE CLASSICS
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