Review Detail of QueenFrieza in Tower Of Sin

Overall this is a wonderful start! If you're considering giving it a read, please do! I'm impressed by the details with each new chapter. The world the author is setting up is definitely going to grow into something amazing. My only critique is possibly breaking up some of the longer paragraphs. On an online reading platform, it tends to make the info easier to digest in smaller chunks. There are also some errors with past vs present tense not being consistent. The small issues are very fixable and the book is shaping up to be so much fun. Excited to see what's next for this one