Review Detail of Galanar in Tower Of Sin

Seems like I'll be your harshest review yet. Good. The writing quality could be better, due to small mistakes here and there, like redundancy and verb tenses, but there are no glaring typos or the such, so 4 stars anyway. The update stability is good. 5 stars Story development, to me, is lacking. Nothing happens really in 6 chapters, albeit the very funny humor. 2 stars. The character design is good. You clearly represent your character as a gym bro and make him funny in his inner musings and interactions with monsters. 5 stars. World background is still lacking. We don't know much about his original world nor the tower, for now. 3 stars