Translation Quality 5/5: There may be hidden grammar errors but it doesn't interfere with the read. Stability of Updates 5/5: I will leave this one as it is, it is quality I preferred over the quantity. Story Development 4/5: Interesting Take! Not as complex and deeper though, but it is a very simple read and enjoyable! Character Design 4/5: Though the MC is standard and thoughtful, I would love it if he would have some noticable flaws too. World Background 3/5: Uhhh not much to be honest, though I LOVE simplicity, it would be nice if the world building fits more into my imagination <3. You're doing great!

Translation Quality 1/5: Bad. If I would blame translation on, it would directly go into word choice and grammar. 5/5: I don't judge the time it takes for updates of new chapters or rewrites in general, I would prefer quality over quantity. Story Development 3/5: honesly meh, but I appreciate the Author's effort into trying something new. But it gets bland when it follows the story of the original MHA. Character Design 3/5: I would say pretty meh as well, but the type that isn't that all unique or anything aside from having a system and copies other quirks. He doesn't have his own special thing going on. World Background 1/5: It's the same playout of the original works. I do enjoy the familiar setting, but it gets so old... Note: Don't let my critic be taken and downplay your efforts as an author, even as a fanfic writer! Love from a reader who read every chapter on the latest!! <3

Still applies to the author

I'd like to think his "system storage" is just a comically large hiking backpack filled with whatever the hell he had.

Woah? This is a new feature?

[Review Update] Writing Quality 4/5: Simply Outstanding and Simple to read! Rarely any mistakes toward grammar and wording! But those don't interfere at all! Stability of Updates 5/5: I will leave this one here. Story Development 5/5: I think you would want to read this. Character Design 5/5: I have no problems with the character designs! All of the original characters are depicted accurately and on-point in their dialogue! The main character is also v e r y lovable, I love the concept!!!! World Background: Classic Yu-Gi-Oh setting if you are familiar with the series! I expect additional areas the author might provide!

Good as always (Late Response)

GAH. WHY!? THIS IS AN WHOLE EPISODE WORTH!!?!?!?

Ouch. Not a subtle read in the beginning. I had no problems with the current reading level. I generally enjoyed the start, but as it progresses further it would then turn bland. Not enough details, development with the pokemon, or even a set goal. I encourage the improvement of the author! <3

Uhh how many h White dragons... Jesus.

I need magic in life now.

Jesus Christ

Of course. Demoman Seamus.

Cool I can do two powerstones per day? Nice. Take it all.

I would like to think of it as disarming their ability to breathe

I came back HOLY ALOT OF CHAPTERS

You can't do this to me author. I scrolled down to find NOTHING!

To think I would be this shocked reading this comment...

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The ship is not strong with this one