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Drool with envy? Really? Simply “filled with envy” would’ve sufficed
After saying “…Jason’s gear was all epic quality…” use a semi colon before describing his gear.
Another grammar error
Using the apostrophe is not necessary anymore and you also incorporated it wrongly.
You’ve already made it clear that it is a game, no need for repetition. Also, there is an error there; Jason played AS a grand mage
First things first, why don’t you have a synopsis?
I look forward to that
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Not bad. You’ve inspired me to write a biography someday. My advise to you is to keep your head down and concentrate on what matters. I’m not that old, but I have gotten a number of experiences in this my short life and I know how it’s best to stay away from certain people in other to grow. “Selena” has taught you an important lesson. I don’t know what that is, but I‘m sure you already know. Live a good life Gabriel Tempo. Stay away from women until you’re ready.
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