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SKMnovels11dReplied to batman_3_3_Just keep reading lol
"Don't use your quirk on humans so easily. The backlash could range from a headache to your brain imploding," she warned, her tone serious.- SKMnovels13dReplied to Silent_Killer_6981Ch 3 I Want To Kill You Even More
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Every quirk has limits, but imagining death is possible.
[Quirk name: I Imagine!] - SKMnovels5mthCommented
Drool with envy? Really? Simply “filled with envy” would’ve sufficed
His teammates were similarly equipped, all in epic gear, a formidable lineup. Any player here would drool with envy. Even though "Eternity" had been running for years, most players still struggled for a piece of dark gold equipment; epic gear was nearly mythical! - SKMnovels5mthCommented
After saying “…Jason’s gear was all epic quality…” use a semi colon before describing his gear.
Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear. - SKMnovels5mthCommented
Another grammar error
Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear. - SKMnovels5mthCommented
Using the apostrophe is not necessary anymore and you also incorporated it wrongly.
Jason and his team were currently venturing into the top dungeon of "Eternity," the "Frost Crown" in hell mode. This mode had never been conquered, with the leaderboard still empty. - SKMnovels5mthCommented
You’ve already made it clear that it is a game, no need for repetition. Also, there is an error there; Jason played AS a grand mage
In "Eternity," a fantasy game, Jason played a grand mage. After several years of operation, most players in this world had reached the maximum level, including Jason. - SKMnovels5mthCommented
First things first, why don’t you have a synopsis?
Wedge - SKMnovels5mthReplied to just_stay
I look forward to that
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- SKMnovels1yrCommented
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
This book has been deleted. - SKMnovels1yrCommentedCh 1 Start of a New World
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