Review Detail of DaasWolfe in Unnamed Crown

I read till Chapter 10 and this is a review for the first 10 chapters. This actually good first the story line is unique although a bit fast paced for my taste second the characters design surfaces through their actions and body language I am pretty impressed by this although this should come at later stage of the novel and you should focus more the MC in the first chapters. But all in all this is really good i enjoyed reading it. And finally this is out of topic and not part of the review this genuinely my advice, you have a great novel i have some guesses why its not doing great and most importantly i think you started slow. Just so you know if you manage to release more than 15 k words in your novel for first month you will enter the top starlet novels on the main page for 5 days, and that's where you get your first batch of readers, people who will like your novel will end up reading it and sharing it with their friends of course stable update is a must later on but for now i am just talking about the first 30 k viewers. Good luck, i would love to see this book succeed.