DaasWolfe
The moment i wrote my first chapter, i was so happy, because at that moment i was already half the way in.
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Hemi Weiss or rather "Hymie Weiss" Was a Polish-American mob boss who became a leader of the Prohibition-era North Shore Gang and a bitter rival of Al Capone. These names aren't Jewish.
Bugs Moran that's an Irish name. and Moran to be exact is an Irish name for an American gangster who lived in Chicago. Was born in August 21, 1893 .... extra You can google that.
I have rewritten the first 7 chapters since i have improved a lot now, and I plan to rewrite the rest slowly without affecting the daily release, so grammar and the overall reading experience will improve a lot, but I can't really change names. Not at this point anyway, while some characters will die in the next few chapters, others are going to live through the novel, Changing names now may be good for new readers, but this will affect the quality for the people who have already read through those chapters. Your advice is good and helpful for the upcoming chapters, but it's too late to do anything about the names in these early chapters.
I have a plan for them but iam not sure i will implement it or when. But i will let you know regardless. Elena will be a manager of art and washing ditty money. Irena will become some kinda of media big shot. Media is an important link in hardy future business but that will cost a lot of money than again i still havent found a way to get him enough money for anything XD 😂 shouldn't have killed dany so early he was such a good Money printing machine.
There will be better girls with a more sofisticated romance plots and some with good back ground. But yes i will keep Marissa in the harem. Not the best crafted character but i have keep her since i already invested a lot of chapter describing her.
As to why there are only a few reviews, with the most recent one being more than a month ago, I am honestly helpless. Web novel reviews require too many words, and people are busy and don't have time to write a review with 250 words. Who would do that? So when it comes to reviews, it will take a while to accumulate new ones.
Yes, I did drop it a year ago. I had to do military service, which is a must in my country. Later, I came back and tried to keep writing, but after a whole year of separation, I found it very hard to continue the first novel, so I decided to rewrite it. I kept what I could and changed most of it. Honestly, you can say I started a new book since all the 100 chapters I currently have, I wrote all of them in the past 50 days. Generally, I write two chapters a day, and when I am tired, I write just one and make up for that at the end of the week.
No, it's still too early. It's a good means for capitalists to make use of war to make money, but honestly, only big corporations have this privilege, small millionaires have no share in the war carnival, and it's not time yet for that, there are still 3 more years before the Korean wars start. Still worth considering, and thank you for reminding me of that. I actually forgot about the Koreans War.