It was an enjoyable read. I will keep a tab on this and read it. I like your start, but a lot of room for improvement. Keep going! You can make this a good story with proper efforts!
I was honestly a decent read, but a lot of room to improve. You should concentrate on typos on the titles and your synopsis is not really a synopsis. Make tiny improvements at a time, and you'll get there!
Good start by the way. Keep going!
A good start honestly. Give this book a try. You might like it. It depends on your taste whether or not you like it, but why not.
I spent some quality minutes reading this!