A very good story that started out capturing the reader's interest and attention ended up totally destroying the mood of the reader. The story was going well until the last 100-150 chapters where it felt like the author forgot the premise of his own story. The title of the novel makes no sense by th end. I felt like the author/writer was happy with just making money by fooling the dedicated readers at the start and then did not even bother writing properly later on. He wantedly destroyed a good novel.

I really like the concept of this novel and was really into from the start. However, even though the story is good, I cannot help but get frustated because there are so many chapters that are a waste. There are so many moments that feel like the story is being dragged just to increase the number of chapters for every minor or small incidents. It is very irritating and spoils the reader's mood. Sometimes I feel the author is purposefully dragging the story to increase the word and chapter count. It is very frustrating for me as a reader to watch such a good concept and story being mishandled.

It has a lot of potential but the character of the mc is really too irritating. Whenever a problem occurs, he gives in and keeps finding ways to run away and not face it directly or even try using his brains. What's the point of having so many overpowered skills and items but still being scared all the time and trying to run away. The author cannot have the mindset of having a full clan development story being lowkey style. One or two people being lowkey kind of story is understandable but not a whole clan development one. Where is the respect for a clan leader if he keeps giving in and trying to run away whenever a problem occurs.

I really like this fanmade continuation of the original novel. I know that the writer has already stopped working on this, but as a reader and a genuine fan, I can only hope that if the writer sees this, you will contine to update this novel. It is a really selfish request but all I hope that, even as a hobby, you can finish this novel. Thank you!

I do not understand why the magic genius talent was ignored and not used to get full magic cultivation during the group task?

Love this novel. Although it could do better with less arrogant young masters and the typical Chinese cultivation tropes. Otherwise, its a fun read.

The novel is really enjoyable. There are certain parts that I find are not explained properly or are skipped entirely so I hope it does not stay that way, but nothing major. The only problem I find is that, I have read up to chapter 140 but the power ranking system has still not been explained properly. There are mention of first, second and third class spellcasters as well as something called paragon, but there is no explanation of how these classes/level of power is comprised. What are the requirements or conditions to be considered such. I hope the author can give an explanation on this.

Also, I suggest adding a proper ranking for the beasts as well because it is confusing at times, for example, around chapter 178, when he says he is a rank 2 cultivator as a whole and goes all out to defeat three similar ranked opponents but can easily fight against a rank 3 beast. It becomes confusing at these moments for the reader.

I am liking this novel a lot. There are small things that are not written well or are unsatisfactory according to me, but its passable. The only issue or problem with this novel is the ranking system. There are three different rankings for the three forms of power. Then there is a fourth ranking which is based on the accumulation of the three previous rankings. The problem is that this fourth ranking is not specifically mentioned about how it is formed or what combination of the 3 rankings make each of the fourth combined one. Then there is the issue of the item rankings. Higher rank beasts are used to make lower rank weapons which somehow have their own rankings. i would like to suggest making a clear chapter in the start, before the novel begins, properly indicating all the rankings and a bit about what constitutes them. A separate chapter only for the separate three rankings and what combination of them leads to the fourth combined rank.

I would also like to add that it is really POINTLESS to have fight scenes regarding useless characters who will be forgotten or not even needed very soon. It is a waste of time and chapters. If this is how you wrote only 200 chapters in 8 months, then I would rather suggest now itself to the the future readers who will read this comment to not waste their time on this novel. Please don't take this the wrong way. I have nothing against your novel, in fact I love the concept and only want a good story to be written out of it. That is why I am suggesting develop and improve your novel so that the concept does not go to waste. Btw, again, the writing and english is really really frustrating.

I will be honest here. The novel will stop most of the readers at the start from continuing to read it, after a few chapters. The English, writing and grammar is really frustrating. I am trying to read the novel and hoping that the further I read, the better the writing will become, but its just unbearable. It is same mistake all authors make trying to please the readers by making excuses that it will get better later on. You have to understand that the start of the novel is the most important part of the reading experience, it contains the general idea of the type of the novel the reader is going to expect and important information that is to be known to understand the story. If the start is so frustrating and unbearable, you cannot expect the readers to continue reading your story. It has been 8 months and there is still no edits to the beginning, this shows why your novel is still not so popular and the support received is not that great. This is just my suggestion as a reader as it is the only reason I will mostly not continue reading this novel. I don't know if this helps you or it will be ignored, but thats all I can say. Also, the update stability, in my opinion is slow as compared to other popular and thriving novels on webnovel, so if you are looking to succeed as a writer and not a part-timer, I suggest you buck-up and pick up the pace.

Why do all good novel ideas get spoiled by stupid authors. I can understand if you were an amateur writer at the start but it does not mean you were brainless. I have really tried giving this novel a chance but I can't anymore. I have a lot to say regarding this novel that has been destroyed by the author but I don't want to waste my time by writing an essay. The only consistent point of this novel is the excuses from the author and him not listening to the genuine concerns of the readers. This novel is not even worth it even for time pass as it will just reduce the reader's brain to the level of the one of the most stupid, brainless MC.

I cannot believe it took the author one year just to write 150 chapters with basically zero development. Why do such good story concepts get ruined by useless writers. This whole concepts deserves a redo with proper writing development skills. The MC is the most useless one ever found in any story. The rating must be high because of some manipulation or removal of true reviews.

Another really good novel spoiled by Webnovel and the translator. Why the hell is the novel a mix of western and eastern at the same time. Sometimes it feels like the college they are in is still in the same country and sometimes they are in a different country. It is such a mixed up and bad situation the spoils the reader's mood and removes all the built up motivation to continue reading. If they are in a different country for college, then how are orphanage children so easily able to travel between countries without any worries. This is just an example. Whoever is translating this novel should at least have this much common sense, but i have no words for you for this stupidity.

What a trash and utter rubbish novel. I have never seen a boss who is so underestimated by everyone and has to go around hiding his actual power. The story makes no sense as randomly the power level of the world increases on it own in the middle of the story and suddenly there are stronger people appearing out of nowhere without any proper explanation. Also, which boss goes around listening and following the rules. The idea of the novel was good, the only problem is that the person/author who got this idea is brainless and does not know how to write. He should be lucky that its a novel on webnovel, otherwise it would be found in garbage.

The start was really good and it continued to be good till around chapter 1000. From then on the story was dragged and the same thing was repeated on and on. The author was also really unjust with the other supporting characters as well as he barely gave anyone a proper happy time. The ending was abrupt and felt like a waste of time reading.

Was really enjoying the novel until chapter 1002 arrived and from then on, half of the reading mood disappeared because translation quality went down to literally 0 stars from 5 stars. Obviously a fucked up website like webnovel did not care about this as long as some random assholes and webnovel itself could make money out of it. This is why readers are reluctant to believe the claims of some genuine writers because majority of the people on this site are trying to scam people and webnovel is basically supporting them by not doing anything. VERY DISAPPOINTING.

I enjoy this novel a lot. But for insulting a country's culture without any basis is the reason for such a rating. The story can be as great as possible but there is no need to insult another country's culture and method of eating is same as agreeing to others saying that your country's food culture is not worth anything. There should always be a limit to one's remarks. Even though I enjoy this novel, I wish I could give it a 0 rating because of this reason.

I really like the idea and concept of the novel so far up to which chapter I have read(278). Still there are a lot of inconsistencies in the novel. I feel. Firstly there are many unnecessary information in most of the chapters taking up a lot of unnecessary words which could be used somewhere else. Also, a proper world background is missing, with information here and there that does not make much sense. It is better to use an extra chapter before the novel begins like some novels here do, where they provide a general outlook to the whole world background. It will no doubt contain some spoilers but it will help the reader understand the world more. I suggest providing a chapter before the novel starts which consists of information regarding the power ranks and the levels they relate to. Also a chapter on the world background of the world the mc is in currently. It will help all readers going into the novel. I hope this suggestion maybe helpful a little.

A good concept and idea has been totally dragged on and spoiled by the author. I seriously doubt its an original idea of the author and not stolen from someone because a person who can think of a good concept cannot write such rubbish. The novel was totally dragged on for no reason and the protagonist does not have a mind of his own. He is one of the biggest reason for the novel being such rubbish. What's the point of such an advanced brain if the user/protagonist(or should I say the author of the novel) is brainless and stupid. Fucking ridiculous.