I haven't read too far but from what I have read I would give the novel a 3/5. The descriptions are unique but somewhat exaggerated. The dialogue honestly disappointed me. With the level that the author was presenting through his other descriptions I was expecting more sophisticated dialogue but you are knew so I understand. Im exited for what this can become if the author develops through his experience!

Yo author you dead?

It's good but it's incredibly slow-paced. Also, I don't really like the characters. They just feel very bland. It might just be personal preference, though.

Just a tip to the author. If you lock the chapters super early, no one will pay because no one will be invested in the characters. It also makes people not want to support your work because you make it seem like the only reason you write is for money.

Pretty good grammar for an unknown book, but the mc is quite stupid. He says he wants world domination, but he enrolls in an academy? Personally, I stopped reading there. He also gives the mc a human and devil body which he can switch between whenever he wants. Idk kinda seems like plot armor.

The Writing quality is kinda shit. Most of the time, it's pretty hard to figure out whose pov it's in. There are also problems that are pretty obvious if you read the book. And this is personal preference but the side characters are kinda shit. Nice try though on your first book.

Commenting cause I know the rest will be good.

If anyone wants a visual representation, look up "Rimuru Rage | Rimuru Use ‘Megiddo’ | Rimuru Kills 5,000 humans in the blink" on youtube.

Tbh, I only read the first couple of chapters, but the writing quality and plot ruin it. He reincarnates and instantly realizes how to use his powers? Also, the writing quality is kinda ass, But I guess it's a web novel so there is not much to expect.

The writing quality sucks, tbh. Interesting story, but the author just doesn't have talent. [img=faceslap]

Good stuff. Well written. 3d characters. And an interesting story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Im gonna give my honest thoughts on the book. The first thing to know before reading is that the title of the book is clickbait. Writing quality- 5/5 Its especially good for a web novel Updates-4/5 World background-4/5 I like it. Its kinda unique Story development-4/5 for the first arc 2/5 for the next arc. Ngl this gets very repetitive after he graduates. It's just the same thing over and over again. Kinda disappointing. Character design-4/5 I like it and its unique.

Honestly, it was a decent story for the first 600-700 chaps but after that It became trash. Everything he worked for went down the drain in an instant. It's the common stupid trope of how there is actually an insanely more powerful and advanced species in the universe that the humans just somehow never interacted with. It's like in the Chinese novels where the mc goes up to the next realm and he becomes weak again compared to the other people. Idk it becomes like a 1-star after that happens just because all his progress basically becomes lost. Also idk if it's just me but that trope is so dumb like why not just have earth be its own fucking planet you dont need to introduce an insanely more powerful "realm" just so you can make the book never end. Honestly, I wouldn't have started it if I knew what would happen.

There are a couple of things I'm confused or annoyed about. First of all the mc completely hides his power. Tbh he's a pussy. Second, the mc gets assigned to the academy but isn't in the same class as the mc? IDK if you are trying to make the book not cliche but if you were then why'd you make him hide his power? That's the most cliche plot ever. Idk reading this just made me annoyed at the mc. If you want to have a headache id recommend

Very good writing quality. Posts a lot! Has 3-dimensional characters. And very good world-building. AND IT'S FREE! Well done author.[img=recommend]

Holy crap the writing quality is so bad. Idk how to explain it but if you read the first couple of chapters you will understand. The characters are also one-dimensional asf. None of the characters have emotions. Ppl will love him then in the next second they think he's the antichrist. Would not recommend it. DON'T WASTE UR TIME.

Novel ruined in first 10 chapters. Idk how you have the talent to make someone feel like they are in a book then use it on a shitty plot like this.

Idk why Author decided to nerf the character so hard but it ruined the novel. Pretty sad cause it was decent. Gl next time author. [img=faceslap]

The pacing is absolute garbage. The character development is also pretty bad. The Mc somehow became stronger just by spilling a drop of blood and being in pain for an hour. No struggles at all. I lack any connection to any of the characters. I cant visualize the scene or any of the characters in my mind. The author would type "He stood in front of an entrance hall and then entered it". It gives the reader no details at all. And the grammar is just ass.