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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia1mth
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    I'm up to chapter 61, I'm not interested in downloading the application or paying for this xd Until next time, my friends. They are cared for, loved and loved.

    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia1mth
    Replied to AbyssmalReader

    I'm back, sorry. She had left this place. Recommendations. Blind swordsman, you can read it at nobelmtl. Release that witch, novel. The comic is ugly. Silver rank gatekeeper, noblemtl Transmigrated into a tragic romantic fantasy. There is an English version, but I read it from the Korean version. Turns Out I’m a Great Cultivator, Novel. You can read on mtlnovel. Divine Beast Adventures. Let Me Game in Peace. I have forgotten the names of some really good ones, since I changed cell phones, I read from the Chinese or Korean versions.

    Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain
    Fantasy · DevilDarkness
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia5mth
    Replied to SIN3

    Well yes, but people got used to reading these types of stories and they say, "Ahh! This is very good!" When in reality it is just another of the masses. Instead of thinking, “There's still a long way to go, I'll be getting better,” the author says, “Okay. I hope you find something better”, as if this were the best, that shows how little self-criticism he has. There are definitely many better stories than this, write to me and I'll send them to you. I give you my recommendations. English is not my native language.

    Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain
    Fantasy · DevilDarkness
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia6mth
    Posted

    The story became disgusting. I've read a lot of novels with these kinds of brain circuits, and I always say; The logic they use is very stupid and nonsensical. Personalities like this make the character lack value and depth. The idea was appealing, the beginning was a pleasure, but it became generic and not to mention the speed with which the author destroyed Katara's original personality, typical use of worthless female characters. But what surprises me the most is the ease and speed with which the author decides to destroy the personalities of the characters by adding a few great touches of foolishness, immaturity and stupidity. Like those Chinese fan fictions where they completely degrade the original characters. In short: Generic. If you like these types of stories, you will surely love. Not to mention other aspects that he does not mention. this one. My native language is not English. The sad thing is that a lot of people like this kind of story developed under the standard of a protagonist with no personality. It kills without batting an eyelid anyone who tries to "harm" it, even if it is because of a great misunderstanding with justification (where the main culprit is the protagonist), thus ruining the possibilities of a more coherent, solid and deep development with the addition of more characters and roles that give life to the plot.

    Avatar: Burning Leaves
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia7mth
    Replied to MajorLove_Gravy

    All right, the only good thing is the world, the rest urgently needs an editor and more writing skills.

    The Author Is Speechless
    Fantasy · Matsuba_Kuroe
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia9mth
    Commented

    The way the author does things are very childish, the ability of God, if we go to the premise of that ability should not act like that (without logic). How did the hero know it was Hikaru? Why force a fight that clearly won and place it as the losing side? Based on the destructive and practical power, the dragon won over the hero, if she does not want her to win, remember that she can use all kinds of magic, it is basic, but there are many elements, there is practicality in her ...

    Hikaru replied, "Ignore her. If I comfort Saraya, she will cry even more. Let her become stronger, more mature. This world is very harsh. How will Saraya mature if I comfort her all the time? Let her feel her worthlessness. Then she will rise on her own and try to get stronger."
    Misty World: Start with SSS skill
    Fantasy · HikaruKiki
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia9mth
    Commented

    The author generates problems very stupidly, don't you think? It seems like those meaningless Chinese novels in the slaps.

    "Hikaru, I advise you to distribute food to everyone quickly. We are all human. In times of tribulation, we must unite and share."
    Misty World: Start with SSS skill
    Fantasy · HikaruKiki
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia9mth
    Posted

    It's interesting, but the internal dialogues and monologues are very childish, even the development of the story itself. I hope that over time you will improve those not so mature aspects. Luck!

    That time I got reincarnated as my in-game character
    Action · LAXMAN_RAJPUT
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia9mth
    Commented

    Extremely childish and meaningless. Tip, socialize more or investigate how to flirt and how human relationships work.

    Karthik took sword from that girl's hands and hugged her from behind and started cuddling her. She want to resist but she can't, Karthik's cuddling making him blush, Karthik replied "I know about her that even she doesn't know about herself. She is going to be my female in future so It's my responsibility to have all information about her. And by the way, what's your name?"
    That time I got reincarnated as my in-game character
    Action · LAXMAN_RAJPUT
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia9mth
    Commented

    No app, no novel? Goodbye.

    Ch 14 Ending it here
    No More Pain For This Villain.
    Fantasy · Satan03
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  • Alejandro_Tapia
    Alejandro_Tapia10mth
    Posted

    Unnecessarily long paragraphs, little use of periods. I couldn't stand reading after he revealed his reincarnation and the plot objects, but the main problem that made me abandon the story was the text structure and dialogue arrangement.

    Fey in the Dungeon [DanMachi]
    Anime & Comics · Super_Surprised231
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