It’s fine I don’t need to know… as long as it’s articulated and displayed well in the novel theirs no point in discussions

I understand them having a friendly bias within each other due to seeing themselves or their hardships in one another… but within like 24 hours that bias turned into an intense life and death realtionship. I just felt it was to fast. While I just thought of the ghost turning evil as I guess taking damage and it’s effect would be reduced in reality due to the previous rule. And the fact this outcome was in a trial rather than seemingly reality

Also the reward from the tower seem unfair… sure aquiring mythic rarity is fine though you don’t do a good job disinguishimg the rarity with power level… I don’t believe he should get tier 9 things when he’s tier 2-3 even though he can fight higher tier existence… the rational for his strength seems odd as well… they way your describe it, you can tier up as long as you know how and have a stat that is the pinnacle of the current tier… so increased power beyond your tier is fine as long as you have multiple stats at the pinnacle of your tier… idk

He doesn’t know if the trial is reality or illusion… he makes a monster his guide once he relized her intelligence… the monster follows only for her rationized safety but they form a bond for some reason I don’t understand he feels the need to give up the trial or his life because the guide gets injured (he suspects died)— that’s pretty much it broken down but… his body outside the trial seems to be influenced from his body inside the trial, even though it’s not specified it feels like a 1 to 1 mirror of his situation inside the tower. Even though it’s stated his body in real life should only reflect half the damages from in side the tower

Why does he make these stupidly intimate connections with people he barely knows so far as to die for them… it’s so annoying how unrealistic everything feels

When u can’t write

Who’s to say the medallion can transport souls across world? Explain… what about the possibility that the medallion just held the soul for a long time and reawaken after reaching this world

Isn’t he senju… shouldn’t he be not to worse

Why didn’t he foresee potentially dieing? He could at least have researched human compatible cells that can kill the wizard cells to mellow the process out, no need for such dramatics

No, idc just didn’t understand it’s purpose… but I read the last chapter of your last book and figured it out. You don’t even need it anymore at this point, so it doesn’t matter

Why?

How is this an enhancers ability? Sounds more like a conjurer

Err… just to have other things I’d rather do right now. I only write when I’m bored out of my mind… I’ll probably write some more over the summer. Though if hella people were reading this it could motivate me to prioritize it. Should I continue with this story?

Not free

Impossible to read unless you want to become homeless

Where’s the adaption?

It’s just a fanfic bro… keep it a hobby don’t let it effect your life too much. If your adamant about being an author for your career, don’t narrow everything on fantasy and siFi. I’d recommend looking for opportunities in writing news articles things for people. You can make Meh money doing it. Most do that as a hobby. Just beware of AI, use it for yourself but don’t abuse it or let it abuse you. Though if you want to go the strict money route. Stable and professional jobs are rare and frankly not effective. In this day and age as long as you put in hard work and have dedication. You can make a 100k driving for Uber. Their is always a solution to everything, it’s just depends on what you want to sacrifice.

I started months ago and came back after more chapters were written. The quality of weighting isn’t that good, lots of obvious errors but it dosnt really matter. Ive completly quit in the middle of the author ark. This ark reveals two things. One pro, one con. The pro is a pretty cool original perspective on the world and building it into something cool. I wouldn’t know how well it has been incorporated into the story, due to leaving early. But it has good potential, though I do NOT trust that the author will take advantage of it. The CON slash reason I’m quitting this story. Is the protagonist submitting to somebody else’s will with out question basically becoming a slave. Now the Author villain concept in of itself isn’t bad. It’s just the submission of the protagonist. Even though the protagonist could very well step up for himself. And if it eludes you, I can and will explain… Firstly the protagonist just trusts the villains word and dosnt question anything. When he can very well use the leverage the villian has over him to leverage the villian back. Because the villian wants something, and by holding something precious of the protagonist, the protagonist also wants something. Their basically on equal terms. So the protagonist can very well negotiate with the villain to garentee his intrest, in exchange for the intrest the villian is intrested in.

Haven’t read the book in a while… I went back and couldn’t find it, and figured it didn’t matter due to the feature opening a plot hole in the whole story… It goes over a bit smoother the way it currently is… I may fix it if I can maintain the flow

H