Honestly, I didn't really understand the purpose of this alternate version, after all, just the fact that the novels characters exist in a world where Kim Dokja hasn’t read the ways of survival, doesn’t make sense. Furthermore, if I'm not mistaken, the concept of parallel universes was only created after Kim Dokja brought the story to reality, before that it was just a normal world, so there is only one version of this event in time *Google Translate*

Author, you had commented that Cid and the MC would fight in the future, but as Cid will not be present in the second trial, do you intend to return to this world scenario in future tests or is the system simply lying?

(Google Translate) You really are planning to spare him without him crying and begging for his life, because that was the condition he set. By doing this you might even get them to stop despising Lexus, but you'll build a reputation that your word isn't worth much. 😕 What is highly valued in a ruler.

(Google Translate) Man, since a certain moment in siscon fanfic all akikan fanfic are like this, his narrative is full of excuses for the characters to act in a way that is convenient for the protagonist, without real personality. if you don't like it or don't get used to it, I recommend dropping the fanfic.

(Google Translate) Author, usually in your novels, you don't work so much on building characters, because readers already have knowledge about them. How about in this novel you try to do something different? My idea is to have at least one arc or mini arc for each member of your harem, because in the original work, no woman from Riser's harem was deepened and each one will be very important in the fanfic, and if we readers know their stories, we we will have a greater attachment to the characters. Ps: Answering your question about how many chapters you think you should post, if you follow my suggestion above, I would say that it is better to reduce the number of chapters, so that you can focus more on writing the story of each one and how they met Riser in the best way possible, with good planning (hence the fewest chapters), for the amount itself I think a chapter every two days or a bigger spacing would be good, but that’s something for you to decide.

(Google Translate) hey author, will Ciel manage to exaggerate the epic, to make the feats bigger than they really are? or does she just manage to hide him from the world notice?

(Google Translate) At this rate I don't doubt he'll acquire all the legendary classes in the game (including Piaro's class), but if that really happens I hope he can create a new legendary class, like Piaro, which is not part of the nine legendary classes. Ps: It would be cool if he did this through his legends, as happened with his swordsmanship, which due to his fight with Baal ended up acquiring properties of a fire dragon.

(Google Translate) probably not, the author made it clear that his abilities have nothing to do with Tensura, so unless he tries to be ambitious and make the famous plot of merging vrmmo world and the real world, the protagonist will only exist in satisfy.

tough decisions must be made 😔

(Google Translate) How can you be so cruel author? you left the Riser boy in a difficult situation, because if he wants to earn the extra reward he will have to invite his sister to the "party"

(Google Translate) You really don't know akikan hahahahaha

(Google Translate) Really… at the beginning it was fine, as it had only a few problems such as the interaction between the protagonist and his childhood friends being very forced and unnatural, but until then it was ok, but since the protagonist started doing his "pranks" with Ramiris, the story has been getting worse and worse, the protagonist no longer had his own personality and only did what the author wanted him to do, so that you gave the protagonist a tragic backstory if you went to throw it all away? Well… I will follow up to the end, whether the author discards it or not, and I will make a detailed review of each thing that I didn't like and that I liked (there were few)

Hum, i like it …………………………………………………………………….……………………………….

(Google Translate) Bro, I read up to about chapter 30 and I didn't find anything too much, could you explain more specifically the reason for your revolt?

(Google Translate) bro, if you have a problem seeing people giving 1 star in your novel, add the NTR tag, it’s simple. because although you think it's unfair to see so many people who were accompanying you cursing you and leaving negative reviews on your work, which you must have put in a lot of effort, because most people hate this type of work, and if you don't signal that your work has NTR, many people feel extremely betrayed, and having an outburst of fury, because if they accompanied you, it's because they liked your work. In my opinion, their criticisms are fair and should not be deleted, and I would suggest that you warn them clearly that your work has NTR and if someone gives a 1 star review after that, you as the author have the full right to complain, as you have indicated your target audience, an example of cases like this are LGBTQIA+ stories where they are properly flagged, not causing discomfort to those who do not like this type of story. Ps: if u don't write more stories that contain NTR, i recommend u create another account, because u just acquired the worst stigma as author of this site, and people won't trust you anymore.

"Google Translate" Hey akikan, I was thinking at some point in my life to create a fanfic, although I won't be able to so soon due to lack of time, but do you have any tips? from how to create to how to maintain the frequency and etc.

(Google Translate) it would be funnier if the dialogue was: Dr Genus: Yes. May I ask, what is the source of your power? Is that okay? Tamazuki: pick up woman All: … Hahahahahaha

(Google Translate) He made her win the lottery.

Google translate. Unless the dragon's eyes can evolve infinitely, his decision was stupid, because even if the eyes are better, his stats do not have a maximum growth limit, and from the hand of God, the number of stats he has win is giant.

bro, the mc literally screamed the name of his artifact. 😐 Google translate