If you don’t want to write the story, that’s fine. I really love reading this but it’s not worth forcing or burning yourself out. Stay happy and healthy and, if you’re up for it, I look forward to reading more.

Love the reference. Always good to meet a fellow fan of one of the greatest edema ruh to ever tread the world.

I don’t mean to be rude, but did you mean to write, “A produced a series of esoteric devices,” or did you actually mean to write, “I produced a series of esoteric devices?”

Gavlan wheel? Gavlan deal.

I could be wrong, but based on the context, I think you meant his once-white sclera suddenly turned black.

Thank you for the chapter! This might be one of my favorites that you've written so far. Admittedly, I'm biased because I love Bloodborne, but still. I can't wait for more.

I’m glad you called it out. I like that fanfic and was surprised to see it emulated here.

I'll happily give it a look once I finish reading this ff.

I am curious. Was this meant to be "Tread carefully," or was "Dread" an intentional choice?

I have greatly enjoyed this story so far. Thank you for your efforts in crafting it. While I am excited to go and read your other stories, I do hope that you will return to this narrative again in the future as I look forward to seeing the end of Oz’s journey.

While I don't typically review the stories I read, I felt the need to do so for this one because of just how many horrible reviews this fanfic has received. While its certainly not a masterpiece, it is one of the more fun novels I have read on this site. The world is fun, the characters are pretty consistent, their actions and decisions feel in line with how their characters are described. The main character is neither a lunatic who thinks he is "righteous" by defying and killing criminals, he is also willing to get his hands dirty to protect those he cares for. Additionally, his power level increases such that he is OP without being so overpowered that the world has no more consequences and becomes boring. I definitely recommend giving this fanfic a try.

ROCK AND STONE!!!

Love this fanfic. Looking forward to future chapters.

@nyawdao3, I could be misunderstanding, but to my knowledge, Ur is the mother, and Ultear is the daughter. When you say that Ur was with Precht and Ultear was with Evan, are you saying that Ultear has already been rescued and Ur is now hiding in Grimoire Heart? Or is it a case of mixed-up names?

During my time on this site, I have read quite a few fanfics from a variety of sources. There is no doubt in my mind, however, that this is the best of them that I have encountered so far. From the characterization to the world-building to the pacing, everything here was absolutely amazing. I had not one thing I could complain about except for the fact that this is not an actual book series that I might purchase to own. To the author, I simply say thank you for your hard work and effort in bringing this story to life. It has provided me with a lot of joy in reading.

Thanks for the advice. I guess I’ll give ORV a second chance.

Thank you for the chapter. I just finished rushing through the novel and I’ve greatly enjoyed it so far. While I’m not a fan of the omniscient reader’s viewpoint, I’ve greatly enjoyed your rendition of it. I’m looking forward to where you take the novel from here.