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Well, this chapter or a previous one, Mc talks about recording his life to make a series or a film
now it makes sense
There's a story here in the webnovel "In Marvel for Dante" by Dmc with Marvel, very good by the way, the amount of fanfics about anime tires me, there's a lack of fanfics about Mutant Rex, Adventure Time and other forgotten classics
classics forever ✊️😌
I consider this discussion of "Harem works or not" a waste of time, it's the same thing as discussing whether Goku is stronger than Saitama because both things depend on what the writer wants and the reader being able to believe in the story.
did you read?
Firstly, I skipped practically 40% of all the dialogues because the writing is a bit confusing (there is space between what is spoken and what is not) 2nd The power level doesn't make sense, in the classic Dragon Ball There were characters destroying the moon, not to mention BP, which I think is just a number that the author picked randomly and put in just to show that Mc has a 3rd system. What really irritated me was when Mc's mother DIED and it was like " Oh, I'm a piece of shit" like super sayajin? Hello? but apart from these grotesque defects you can read it if you ignore 80% of the details
Considering a bad idea
The character and the story are very good, but one thing that bothers me is how long it takes for things to happen. A fight against some thieves lasted more than 2 chapters, the first mission lasted about 3 chapters, I think it would be better to make big chapters where a situation happens and ends in the chapter itself. But it's still a great story
I tried really hard to read the whole story but I couldn't, the protagonist has a system where he gains abilities when he has sex with someone, what does he do? he has sex with his own clone, and when a girl is interested in him he seems to have no brain and, for no reason at all, Naruto starts dating Tenten as they have just met and out of nowhere there is the scene where Anko has sex with the Orochimaru sleeping