Great chapter, thanks for that.

Thanks for the chapter

I only give it 5 stars because literally the author just used two words that mean the same thing (synonyms) XD Don't take this review seriously, I haven't even read the fanfic.

Thanks for the chapter

Wow... How useless.

¡THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER!

Thanks for the chapter

So that no one finds them and so that they know where they are, if you put them in the inventory of the system then anyone could see it and it would stop being a surprise

It's rare that there are fanfics about ATLA, but much rarer that there are fanfics about Korra... But if you have an opinion only on that, it doesn't make sense. Although my favoritism is higher in this case... I will give it 5 stars for 2 reasons. 1, I'm only reading 2 chapters and at the moment it's not bad. 2, For this fic to have an overall review of 5 stars, or in any case have a high amount.

I don't have anything bad to say about this Fanfic, There aren't usually too many fanfics about boxing, let alone Hajime no Ippo. Keep up the good work author!!

Thanks for the chapter, I can say that this has potential.

As I said in another chapter... Please don't make the protagonist join the Mugiwara crew...

Seeeh, the author justifies all the bad things they did simply by saying, "They had a bad childhood." It may be understandable to some extent how they came to be villains, but the author brushes aside the fact that they are criminals and forgives them... Bull shit...

Instead of having him team up with Luffy later in the story, why not have him make an alliance with Luffy on his own? It's different from Ace, having him team up with someone else and swear allegiance to them sounds like... A supporting character.

I wouldn't say it was bad but... You have to improve the way you write in the first, second and third person, the rest is decent... Tftc

Mmmm, having him join the Straw Hat crew sounds like a good idea... But it's not something I want to read, besides being a very used idea, it's also a waste of time... He's too overpowered to come together at that point, maybe doing it later in the story or having them make some sort of alliance work better, but to put him together with the straw hats is to be very unambitious, especially if he's from Roger's lineage.

Thanks for the chapter!!!

PodríasYou could take it as if it was just the gaining of knowledge about his abilities, I also find it weird that he is weak... If we can consider it weak.

No, literally this guy just described someone evil, bordering on the description of a villain.