SumaTheCreative
Hey Guys... This is Suma here😊 I write short stories and Novels.. please give your full support 😜:) You can contact me through Discord : Suma_2038#4637 Insta ID : suma_2038
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The story is really good...😁 but it would be more good if you don't use povs. This was said by a well known friend of mine and she is also an author here in Webnovel. And good thing you took a military based story cuz I love it a lot haha😊 and if you'de like kindly check out my Story "The lost cup of Milk" and my novel which is ongoing "Parcae". And please don't get discouraged by any sorrowfull comments and just keep working on it and don't give a crap about what others say...your story just needs a little bit of fixing that's it but overall it's good😉 and I will surely recommend this to my friends😇...
And if you'd wish kindly check out my Novel Parcae and the story The Lost Cup of Milk...And please give a reveiw😉
The Story's not bad but All the describings seem like bragging and it would have been better without those braggings and Kindly check the spelling of each and every words. And the grammar is good😇 Now I am half through the story....so, I do not know the overall concept. So please just take these as a comment from a friend and please don't take it to your heart..."The only Writer whom you should compare yourself is the writer you were YESTERDAY"...So don't get discouraged and just keep Writing🙂
And please do check out my new story THE LOST CUP OF MILK And comment..I just don't know how it is cuz I didn't show the story to anyone I know So I just need a honest comment from somebody who have read it
Yeah Sure..Mei_Knights. Thanks for the advice...☺ I'll try to fix it. Actually I'm planning to rewrite the story with some modifications and without povs and stuffs. but...let's see. Once again Thanks 😄
You're Welcome Shahad...You deserve it after all😉
Hey Author !👋 The story is really good...And you've a great job with the story lines👍 Don't give up and keep going... The Results will increase real soon...🙂 Even my Story Parcae is my first ever Novel I've written now it's getting popular day by day so Don't ever lose hope..🤘 Happy to be your fan and supporter☺ And please do read my Novel 'Parcae' and my new story 'The lost cup of Milk'..I'll be so thankful🧡 And if you would like to spot any mistakes or the way of my writing or my story lines does not seem good please do tell me through my DISCORD Account - Suma_2038#4637. so I can correct them... Good Day Author😺