Review Detail of SumaTheCreative in A spetznaz detachment in another world

The story is really good...😁 but it would be more good if you don't use povs. This was said by a well known friend of mine and she is also an author here in Webnovel. And good thing you took a military based story cuz I love it a lot haha😊 and if you'de like kindly check out my Story "The lost cup of Milk" and my novel which is ongoing "Parcae". And please don't get discouraged by any sorrowfull comments and just keep working on it and don't give a crap about what others say...your story just needs a little bit of fixing that's it but overall it's good😉 and I will surely recommend this to my friends😇...