Your story is also interesting. I can't write as good as yours in English. I'm from Indonesia, I use google translate and grammaly to translate my writing. please don't laugh if my writing is far from good.

Your story is good, keep updating diligently to 12k. Do you already have AE? if you are diligent about updating the view changes in your story account at inkstone. Good luck my dear.

So curious about this.

Keep going

What happen next, sis?

Hello dear. Nice to meet you. Your work is good. keep on going..

You have to go on and on and on to learn to write fantasy books. And stop wanting readers to give you a rating to improve your book, because the most important thing is the content of your story. sorry, as an older person to give you some advice.

You must practice about writing more and more. You can be a great author fantasy..

Sorry I can't gift you, cause my balance not enough..

Continue on..

Great imagine..

What happen next between Rachel and Keith?

great story I ever made. lets read this's and feels great.

hehehe nice case ini.

enjoy my story and please comnent. thanks.

great story I ever wrote. please come and enjoy my story.

Good afternoon.. hi, Sofia Zelmira here. I'm writing a new story. please follow it. Don't forget to comment, so I can develop the story and improve the quality of the story. Thank You.

good afternoon, this's story is great I ever wrote. enjoy it and please giving a comment. thanks

Great story I ever made. Lets enjoy this's story, and giving your comment. thanks.

Hello. Sofia Zelmira is here. Its great fantasy story I've ever made. so enjoy, and give your comment.