I am going to admit, you had me.
ya got me there : )
It seems like a quick and easy thing; plus, dark side powers are easier to use they just need hate to make them work. This one just rips your soul from your body so it's not complicated. I just like how he says it.
Got it thank you
Yeah that's ember to a T
I don't understand this line. What does being a marine have to do with ambition? do they give it up or is there some one-piece lore I'm missing. Please explain.
Never in my life have I needed something so much and never known until i received it
good work on this and thank you for the experience
good to see some life back in the story. Writing emotions is tough but you're doing great. It's your story to tell and I am loving it when you write for you and not for obligation. Keep up the good work.
love what you did with this fight.
Little on the nose