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Story feels a little rushed. would have loved more interaction from the characters. For example, a meeting between the twins and the stan crew and them settling into the mystery shack. It would give you a nice way to show us what you plan to do with the characters. Just my opinion. the premise is cool.
Servant and Master have been reunited once moooooooore... cough
THANK YOU
A toad that wants to eat swan meat.
I am going to admit, you had me.
ya got me there : )
bruh
It seems like a quick and easy thing; plus, dark side powers are easier to use they just need hate to make them work. This one just rips your soul from your body so it's not complicated. I just like how he says it.
Got it thank you
Yeah that's ember to a T
I don't understand this line. What does being a marine have to do with ambition? do they give it up or is there some one-piece lore I'm missing. Please explain.
+1
Never in my life have I needed something so much and never known until i received it
good work on this and thank you for the experience