For those who come to read here to find out about the problem of this book review. This story itself has a background that is almost similar to that of Douluo Dalu. It's just that this story has been modified by the author with quite a lot of modifications. I've read a little about it and found that in this story there is a possibility that the main conflict lies in the side characters and not directly referring to the main character. The main character here will play a role to help or have not. He will decide whatever he wants. For those who are interested, maybe you can read it, this story is not bad for spending time.

Thank you for the advice. I will slowly improve the story and also related to the problem of the story, I have written on my other account and if you want to read it again, please visit a book called Land of Zen. That's the book where the author is Xin. That is me.

Thank you for the input provided. This story itself was built using a bit of Doulou Dalu's foundation, it's just that I've changed a lot of things to avoid plagiarism problems and also I want to earn income from my work. Writing Fanfiction is strictly forbidden to make money, thus, it's impossible for me to do it. Then regarding matters of training or ability, I didn't show it not because I didn't want to. It's just that the story will be boring during the training. This is what caused me not to show the training process that was carried out and only directly showed his abilities.

I will do just that.

Romance and not sure harem or not

This is a revision of the previous story and there will be uncertain update issues. Thank You

Uploads. But, not now. At least, until the entire chapter for this work is uploaded here. 150 chapters. This means that you need to wait a while for it to be uploaded to this place. Maybe two months later it will be uploaded.

take my advice. I've considered it. Please check my patreon page again. i have rearranged member issue

it can't be lowered for gold and silver members because someone has already entered there. unless all of them leave the member, it can still be passed down

Audah can't be lowered for gold and silver members because someone has already entered there. unless all of them leave the member, it can still be passed down

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biasanya 2 hari sekali. jumaat tidak update. hari libur bagiku

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There is a change there. Especially for chapter 5 related to Gae Bolg's weapon settings where previously I placed the weapon on the 100th floor. Then I changed the settings. Then for chapter 8 it is related to the arrangement of placement between holy elixir making materials where in that chapter I explained a little related to the material and also the location to get it. Meanwhile, at this time, I have changed it by only saying how to get it and not mentioning where the specifications of the materials are located. I think that Gae Bolg can't be placed there especially that weapon has quite a bug ability. I wanted to place the weapon on a higher floor and also the effect of the weapon was also changed by me where previously there was a setting that the effect of the weapon's ability only affects adventurers with level 120. While currently I have changed it to all adventurers will feel the effect and only depends on how high defense and equipment they have. Then about the explanation. Every writer has their own writing style. I did this because I really wanted to. I want my readers to know my true intentions too. If I don't do that, usually someone will ask and so on. Usually I don't have time to answer and stuff. Besides that, it also helped me. Because through that I can make better arrangements in the future and also planning. Usually also I used to often forget and something I wrote before. These notes are usually a reminder for me to remember what I wrote before.

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Hmm, yes, you're not wrong. Indeed, English is a language that is not mastered by me. I'm not good in that area. While looking for an editor, well, for now there is still no thought of doing this. Paying for an editor yourself is quite expensive and at the moment I can't do that unless I'm already a big writer and have a large income to pay for an editor. For now, enjoy all that I am about to write. Hope you like it.

no, original

Well, everyone has a different opinion. Some like it, some don't. But, if I use the previous concept, it's too bland and also difficult to develop the story. Besides that, the current concept was that the adventurers of their strength would return to normal strength and also the strength of the monsters was on par with them. In addition, there are other factors such as the strength of the monsters which increases several times at night which causes if I use the previous concept. There would be many deaths in the dungeon and it would only make it difficult to develop the story. There are also a number of other factors that I take into consideration. Well, there is another story that is interesting compared to mine. You can try looking for it on webnovel. Hope you can get it