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romance? or fake life slice

Author not to be a bummer or anything but one problem with your novel is the mc is not doing anything, he's not getting any stronger he's just sitting and doing nothing. I get it he commands a Kingdom but a king should be strong especially when he's in the one piece world, I mean with someone wants to overthrow the kingdom is subordinates aren't there, they can easily take it over and I'm just saying he should have his own strength to stand on par with his strongest subordinate. Just give him some training I saw in like chapters 6,5 he gave hashirama some training bracelets why don't he have some of them so you know train up his strength instead of relying on people but that's just my thoughts you don't have to take it seriously or nothing. But that's why I think people have a problem with your novel is that you never train him up and you just got to trained up the mc. But I'm trying to continue reading it I'm just getting to chapter 7 I read the last book about it and that was the only problem I had with it.