Very fast paced but I like it this way. Not the best in writing quality, but the story is intriguing. Hoping the author doesn't drop this work.

Very interesting story, I really like to read further. I just hope the author doesn't drop this work.

So, I guess this Nick Iron is some sort of "Master of Death", i.e., collected all the hallows; which bound him to this Death entity in someway, which is why he travelled back in time to stop her.

Dude Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!! don't delete this, I was eagerly waiting for its updates. Atleast, continue posting it on some other platform. This is the best Ongoing GOT fanfictions. Your work is great. Please resume posting it!

Dude Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!! don't delete this, I was eagerly waiting for its updates. Atleast, continue posting it on some other platform. This is the best Ongoing GOT fanfictions. Your work is great. Please resume posting it!

Awesome story, very intriguing. Hope to see more of this.

Both please

Would have given a little less rating but I think I need to compensate a little for the exaggeratedly low ratings already given. I think there are a few negatives like the MC being a simp, and such. But the storyline was good. I also liked the fem lead a lot. It is worth investing time on.

self dabboou

Had a good start, but it's starting to get too clumsy with the Twilight, gods addition. It was quite enjoyable when the story was just limited to HP world.

Slow paced, well written story. I just wish Harry uses the technology system more. He majorly only used it for potions till now.

Well written and Intriguing. Felt like too much at times, but those instances are few and ignorable.

Very intriguing story with engaging narrative. Please don't drop it.

Sorry to disappoint you dude, but likability is relative. I liked the MC a lot .If you want over ambitious MCs, there are thousands of Fics out there. I liked this fic so far, it was well written. I even like this narrative mode of story. I think real scenes would be happening as the story proceeds and I hope it happens soon.

*loddy author is racist and sexist. Couldn't the translating person remove them and post?

Daphne, Rose and Hermione please!!!

Very interesting and well written story, one of the best GOT Fics out there.

Dude, grammar is not what concerned me. I read stories with below par grammar if they interest me enough. It is the way you put your idea, the way you express and execute them could be improved.

Writing quality could be improved. It's cringey at times.