Brother, it's hard to understand the story because you keep changing from first person to third person in the middle of a sentence

pic of the mc?

Listen, I don't want to sound like a hater, but serious, you had to go with the mc unconscious trope that he will lose, I don't hate the fanfic, I really love it google translate

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Question According to what I read, you say that Owen Knight is a few years older than the MC, so how is it going to be in the story while the main cast is in high school and the MC is going to be in middle school? (google translate)

The story was good until the mc became a pedophile .......................................................................................................

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I liked the story but because it's so slow it will take at least 800 chapters to reach the time skip and that's not my cup of tea

I'm sorry, I really want to read this story, but it's hard for me to read a story with a MC who hides his powers -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

You could maybe stop putting spaces at the beginning of every sentence it seems out of order. Sorry, it's hard to understand me, English is not my language [google translate]

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Transported to a parallel fictional world

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The story started well but lately the story is changing for the worse at first Joe was smart and would think about what to do before he did it now all he does is to be screwed in any situation where there is something to be screwed with for example whenever he finds a dragon egg he tells For the whole world it's his birthright or it's okay that he's drinking from someone's drink, that she's known for killing her husband with poison Sorry if there are problems error I used in google translate

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