Review Detail of 1olip0p in Kakashi: A new life another world

Item: Kakashi: A new life another world
Rating: 5

Review detail

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Brother, it's hard to understand the story because you keep changing from first person to third person in the middle of a sentence

Aphis

Liked it!

AphisAuthorAphis

Thanks for the tip, I'll review the posted chapters and make an update and I'll pay more attention to this in the future.

5mth