calm down you are in a horry I can feel it as a reader

player or host

i thought he was 30 how come he became an old man

don't you think you're making Roy a fool, this is the 190 chapter yet he hasn't seen the children's faces. Rachel is even the stupidest, living her entire life in lies. She is not even afraid of the consequences of Roy finding out the identity of the children.if it was to be me i will see you as a liar for the rest of your life.I don't know about others but I'm becoming angry with the novel

yes I think there is a mistake there too, if a normal genius could use ten days then a month is too much for him

I'm liking the novel

a group of soldiers cover 30 kilometers in a few minutes ? even cars are advised to run only fifty kilometers per hour

you have a very good story but I think you are over explaining things, for example you don't have to tell us that the babies in the woman's belly were rean and death till after they were born, there is also no need to explain why they can't understand the luck their mother was speaking. give your audience the opportunity to have their own imagination. in truth your story line is good

there are some things you just don't have to explain, let your audience read and figure out themselves

i just don't understand although he could not lie but the flaws don't restrict him from making choices right? he can just choose not to answer a question or tell the person directly that he doesn't want to talk about it, that isn't a lie right. why am I the only one seeing this

the book is becoming annoying this is the 151 chapter yet nothing has improved, she hasn't acquired what she went to the foster for and she was still behaving childish thinking she is being tough, Alexander can't even tell her about his fillings so why call the book "His wide Calls the shots, it should be his crush calls the shot instead."

from your character 1 to 38 had not been up to 24 hours and had only discribe 4 sires of events which are closely related. 1: The second brother saw his runaway wife who was beaten to death in the market and brought her home 2 : he called a doctor to look at his wife which was frowned upon by his third brother 3 the third brother tried to sell his wife but changed his mind 4: second brother beat the third brother up for trying to sell his wife I'm not saying you are not good, the story is a good one but you emphasize on one particular thing making you readers lose track of what they are reading and the book becomes boring,imagine that I kept telling you the same thing everyday won't you be tired of listening to me

the novel is becoming boring, the plot is too slow in fact I'm not seeing it at all

this book started well, in fact i was really enjoying it but right now it's becoming boring and annoying, every chapter was supposed to pass an information with some interesting events but what we get is a short chapter of few and Unnecessary words imagine that brushing her teeth alone is about to take up to five chapters and you are also making your character whom you had you had made his image brilliant from the beginning becoming foolish without any reason, if you keep it this way it will be difficult for you audience to pay for this book

Also know that you are writing a novel, not a poem, your work should be coherent and easy to understand, please try to avoid unnecessary grammar

It's been a long time since I read a good book, keep up the good work

it's called phoenix destiny

i love this book

Well done