Isn’t this a translation cause I’ve read it before it was good but then it became the Usual Chinese translation.

I can’t even remember the novel I’m just going based off what I said previously. But the wishes are biased. Like if you I choose power around marvel and dc it’s make sense. I know those characters can destroy the dc universe. If the mcs power is thor or even Odin but he grows into them it not only make sense as the flash was never powerful of the bat he had to learn. I don’t even read this novel. It’s okay if you want a quick op mc but the novel won’t bang.

What novel or fan fic you thinking. System is a bit alright but then you’ll get too strong.

Only seen chapter 1 after I saw the power it’s chests he had it made no sense. First of all versatile mage doesn’t even have it doesn’t matter if it’s a fanfic it just makes the mc of yours too overpowering. Since you like naming you’re my vlad Dracula, why don’t you do a young Dracula fan fic with you’re my being the twin or younger brother of vlad with the same mother and dad, he wioild have a stronger power and the cheat would be having Vladimir Dracula the vampire movies power. If you’re interested I’ll explain more.

This novel is good keep it up author. Also waiting for the mc to turn good fully. Recommendation: I feel there’s so much you could in another novel as kung fo panda may limite you in terms of the development. I generally think you could create a good fan fic for young Dracula if you have watched it and another one which is common is marvel(excluding mutants) and game of thrones. I’ve got advice on types of characters as the Mc would be a brand new one but will have ties so it’s not randomly out of pictures with no family. If you’re interested in knowing let me know.

You act like you don’t want you’re my to involve himself or ruin stuff but he already has. Even without the mc they would complete the quest but you made you’re mc cause a problem for no reason. All you’re mc has done in this chapter has not been helpful but caused trouble as well as trying to act as the leader when Percy is the quest leader it makes no sense.

Yeah I get that some people don’t care about that type of arc of middle school but that’s how it gets cuts short of novel. I believe if you do a novel with middle school arc it makes it unique people just won’t say it. Also making a ace novel on a batter instead of pitcher is better. I think you could make a novel just look at how these translation are made to help.

This novel is good the writing and the development. But again time and time we see Percy jackson fan fics where the Mc always sucks up to Percy. If this chapter it was going to go like this you should’ve done it from the first chapter instead of here. There’s so many quests you could develop for you’re mc without having to follow Percy. Everyone has their own choice, a Percy jackson fan fic should have an mc that lives their own life in that world and his own quest not try and follow someone else’s like Percy jackson. This was good so far until when he’s following Percy where it disappointed me truly A better Percy jackson fan fic I hope would either be Zeus son or hades son.

If you can create a novel similar to this middle school era and high school you’ll get pure readers. Like a suggestion don’t be a pitcher just a pure batter and let’s say goes to inajitsu and is in sawamura year. That’s unique in every way. Whilst not having an mc who likes following sawamura or likes giving tips.

To be honest I’ve read the Chinese novel of its standard alright. Ace of diamond is good. The reason why it’s good is that it’s unique as it starts with middle school, everyone knows what happened in high school not the middle school area, which no other fan fics of ace of diamond has yet done. The real original novel of this is standard alright is that it has lots of Chinese stuff like his best friend is chinse, certain Chinese students who are so good to join seido which never happened in the real series too much areas that ruined the novel eventually especially the dorm where 2 people moved in and the so called crowd who follow sawamura.

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I’ve sent a request still the same name.

Yeah sure. I would say you should do knight in the area but its limited with the plot. Be blues you cant watch it you can only read it as a manga unfortunately. Days as a book and a show was excellent and ao ashi is alright too, you could choose either one to do a fan fic on . You dont need to rewatch days if you have. Do you have any social links i contact you to talk more about the novels etc.

An additional novel althought its not sports related buts also good. Thats the last airbender avatar- the mc wouldnt be ang or a follower but why not be himself another avatar within that universe where he master all the elements as he is favoured by all of it. Develop it how you want, i suggested that as its better than being a bender who cannot master all 4 due to ang instead he can be equal.

No problem i just want a good sports fan fic novel so im happy to give advice. You havent watched ace of diamonds, then have you read the manga of it? What about ao ashi have you read the manga or watched it? What about Knight in the area have you read it or watched it? How about be blues ao ni nare have you ever read the manga? And days have you watched or read it? These novels are better fan fics to do a novel on as there is no special moves or anything compared to inazuma.

The connections make it so much better with the family relationships. If im honest with you making a new scene with a whole team is hard for you as thats a whole section you have to create whilst adding a new character like yours who is related to either axel or mark or lets say jude and ceclia it would make the novel even better whilst youre mc wouldve gone to either raimon or royal academy.

A fan fic novel i think you should do which would allow character development and give you time is ao ashi, knight in the area or ace of diamond. Ace of diamond i would recommend with a mc that goes to inajitsu thats a batter and doesnt follow sawamura and you can add a black mc or mixed with the mc be related to kominator haruichi.

I have read all the chapters i like the novel although the writing and information could be much better and have more character development. Inazuma is good but why didn't you have an mc who went to royal academy or even raimon or lets say you're mc was half brothers or cousin with endou mamoro/ mark Evans plus he can still be black. Doing a novel on inazuma is hard with all the special moves.

Can you not create a normal atg novel thats nots not yun che doesnt follow him or fight him but works to get stronger and even not have any harem. For legacies there can be double bloodlines with two successors. I would even say phoenix and golden crow profound veins an mc could have meaning he would just be as strong or even stronger with the ancient gods bloodline. Otherwise just doing the same where mc is either yun che or fights against yun che is always pointless and i never said stop you're novel these are recommendations.