ForerunnerOfSky
Writing and reading for fun whenever I can MMA fan, Action fan and martial artist Current ongoing works: We Die Young Discord: Nomad
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is this a thought of the main character? isn't everything a thought of his? why highlight this?
i notice that there is not much dialogue
I still can't get used to the first person perspective, but its fine, is up to each author their style
This is what I'm talking about, create an emotion in a scene, very nice
i like this but maybe you could add some more description to what they're wearing and what they feel as they get closer
🤦♂️ this guy
That’s an interesting way of putting it I thought that meant something like gender fluid or it was an offensive way of saying transgender
Bro I’m feeling like I’m missing some important backstory, but I’m scared to go to the past chapters lol
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Somewhat I styled the character after the punisher, his fighting style is also similar as he doesn’t necessarily use a fighting style in particular he simply uses what is optimal at that moment based off the information he has.
No move loud, he means we don’t need to use stealth so just kill everyone. Also new chapter if you want to check it out it’s one of my favorites it will finish out this arc
Lol how it should have gone down