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Since he lack money, just buy the cheap raw eggs. For a college student, he's not too smart at all. It doesn't matter if it has no taste, what matter is that he get the same nutrient as those not so cheap bentos. For vegies, go find a market that sell for cheap. Easy. Just do it until he found what the heck is going on with his body.
Is the scorpion summon weak that he needs a one time help from the chief of the army? He has a 400,000 year old spirit beast summon already and one on the top ten spirit beast in doulou dalou, so why? Doulou dalou should be a stronger world than versatile mage world.
Uhhhh... What? I can't believe Urahara just let them in just like that. It is also understandable that it was fast paced as the MC has unli energy perk. Guy can just spam his skills and overwhelm anyone, unless the opponent has ultra strong def or can easily swat away any skills the MC throws.
Marco II...
who cares if she's a clone? she has her very own memories. no need to be disgusted just because you banged a clone.
The english is too bad. The idea is good. The MC is trash that he lets almost every enemy walk all over him before he takes action. Like seriously dude! The MC has no pride at all. Those poor girls getting called "b*tch!", getting hurt first or on the verge of getting r*ped before the MC takes action. He's already at overlord realm and he lets some measly earth to sky realm insects to push him too far before he moves seriously. Pathetic MC! And the author is a friggin' ret*rd and childish. So many wasted potentials. So many badass faceslapping scenes to be had. *sigh*
Yeah, it's boring so far as it's full of info dumps as if you assumed all the readers are so stupid that they read this fanfic first before the original one. I mean come on, if everyone read this fic before the original one, would that make it ridiculous? Stop with the info dumps and keep up the pace already!
Since when did he get nerfed? So much for upgrading conqueror's to semi divine. I know you want to make some kind of tension or something similar but this doesn't make any sense at all. I've already forgiven it that Emma is stronger than him as she trains for decades and has a system but Kairi? Doesn't make any sense at all. Why force this kind of thing when he is overly strong already? The one that happened with Mihawk on earlier chapters is the one that makes sense but this one doesn't. You even turned him into coward now and has to get help from others just to fight an emperor when he should be more than enough to demolish them with his powers.
I'm somewhat confused. Is he a reincarnator on his first life? Or maybe this is his third life? Or fourth? The first flashback was him dying with a woman and then there was also a flashback of him with a crippled little girl and now there is that olympus gods. The heck. It's too dam confusing. Well, I skipped after reading a quarter of a flashback chapter and moved on as it was too boring read so I am someehat confused and I don't even want to go back and reread properly either as I said, it's too boring and there is also that voice in the head that pop out of nowhere. So much freaking plotholes.