Tobirama_uchiha777
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Tobirama_uchiha77715hReplied to Honoured_Writersauce ?
"Fucking disappointment," I say as his eyes widen and a flash of extreme anger comes on his face.- Tobirama_uchiha77717hReplied to Anomander_Adaar
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AN: I've narrowed down the Female lead to two people, either Queen Maeve or Kimiko Miyashiro. Please vote on the picture I post in this paragraph section, by liking the photo. Any other ways of voting will not be counted, the vote ends next Saturday, 04/26/2024. - Tobirama_uchiha7771dCommented
we need regular updates authorsan
A voice spoke. "[Domain Expansion: Malevolent Shrine]." - Tobirama_uchiha7772dCommentedCh 235 HWI 235
- Tobirama_uchiha7775dCommented"Now, I've rid myself of the influence of those negative emotions and am a completely new, unprecedentedly good symbiote." (A/N: Source; trust me bro)
- Tobirama_uchiha7776dReplied to no_to_supp_abuseCh 19 The Martells visit II
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this chapter was really idiotic and cringe bro
You'll pay for this. - Tobirama_uchiha7776dCommented
bro she's a kid author's sus af
"Haha, I competed in the archery contest shortly before your mother went into labour. But now I'm a guest and no longer a competitor. Besides, I need to keep an eye on you and that's impossible when I'm competing.", he says and smiles slyly. - Tobirama_uchiha7776dReplied to Slrrrp
most people atleast expect common logic and grammar
A/N So I stopped using ChatGPT to revise some of the dialogue. If you don't like it, don't read it. It is my story and I think my words are not bad. I am doing research to increase my vocabulary already. So take it or leave it. - Tobirama_uchiha7776dReplied to DaoistWDfd8h
I know you are trying to write an asoiaf but this is getting borderline crack fic rather than the tone of asoiaf maybe add the tag of crack or comedy too
"Don't worry, Jon Jon. I can handle myself. And I doubt Lord Lannister would want to start a war by harming the heir of House Baratheon.", Robert said, placing a reassuring hand on Jon's shoulder. - Tobirama_uchiha7778dCommentedThis book has been deleted.
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his arcane hearing musta sensed it Seems a deliberate plot hole to me explain this author
She smirked at Albus' guarded look, "Oh, don't be alarmed, the boy simply trusts me. Who knew that the infamous stone was made accidentally with the essence of a Light Champion killed in a ritual? It was a fascinating read. I put a small charm on the boy which would record everything he saw when he won the diary. It was just too good an opportunity to miss. Unfortunately for you, there was nothing in Flamel's Diary about the location of the stone, at least nothing that the boy has read, so don't be worried about him trying to find it… And since you took the Diary from him, there isn't any risk of him ever finding out. The kid was bluffing, and the fact that you fell for it is hilarious, to say the least." - Tobirama_uchiha7779dCommented"Lady Joanna, your beauty is unmatched in the Seven Kingdoms second only to our mother, and your two daughters are in no way inferior to you.", Robert says stepping forward with a charming grin.
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honestly, although this fic has amazing potential mc is nothing but an avg fanboy taken to an extreme level and it's typical cliched shit where his life Goal is to help Harry, Hermione, and Ron There is no characterization of MC and bro's honestly made in 1D every aspect is just about the trio nothing else Bro immediately thinks of them as his people as soon as he joins the house and has no goal or ideals of his own whatsoever who the fuck does that wtf is that it's like the usual cliche hp fic but in an extreme way
- Tobirama_uchiha77711dCommented
bro imma be honest with you if you seriously wanna write a fanboy then you coulda just reread the whole hp books rather than writing this fic
"Where better to hide great power than in plain sight? Now, let's get you sorted. With that much potential, better be... GRYFFINDOR!" - Tobirama_uchiha77711dCommented
nigga he's 22 no 22 yr old talks like this
"Hey," Jonathan said softly, "whatever happened before, it's a new start now. And you've got friends." He gestured to include Ron and, after a moment's hesitation, himself. Ron nodded vigorously in agreement. - Tobirama_uchiha77711dCommentedYou're getting your chappie don't worry you greedy scallywags!