Holy! .... the author writing is so hard to read, like it kringe and bad at the same time, like have you tried reading it to yourself, have tried comparing your writing style with the more successful author on webnovel, like dam i was expecting an average wish fullfilling harem fanfic novel but what i got was just trash like i couldnt even get past chapter 1 and had to force myself by coping that it'll get better but dammm it was so bad that i didn't even chap 2 and wrote this review.

Average harem novel on webnovel. Oh yeah, if you're not into MC future harem member get raped then this novel is not for you, also for reference chap 125-128 a women who will be mc future harem member get her folds penetrated by a villain fingers.

Typical cultivation harem novel on webnovel, but worst, i was reading chapter 1-20 and somehow got lost at the part where mc started to talk about what happen to the previous body owner, and then it got boring and then i started skipping till i realize time to go next.

I read novel to escape from reality, it's like a break of escape from reality for a couple of hours. When I read the novel, I like to immerse myself in it and kind of relate to the mc and I don't want to f my mom, and invite les to my harem, so thankyou for this review as it helped me not waste money and time on this novel.

the dude has an ego, or is hurt by ur review, idk man, some crazy people online. i wonder if they're like that to their loved ones....

so if a story is trash but has hella content then it's good? what if the content is trash? In the end wat make a story truly good? content only? I would say that your logic is flawed but ur entitled to ur own opinion.

yeah author must not see women on the same level as man cuz if he did then according to u mc got ntred lmao

dam bro u must not be a virgin, becuz all us virgins desire a harem. XD

maybe author don't see women as equal to men, so he don't mind his female mc getting fked by a another women but if he did he should just allowed another guy to fk the girl lmao cuz it wouldn't matter. unless he allows the female to have harem with the male mc other women, now that's some funny stuff to think about. XD

I read about 80 chaps and couldnt continue to read anymore as the mc was an idiot/retard/unrealistic. idk, if author think making mc idiot and retarded some type of comedy but it was more annoying than comedic. I also don't get why main wife keeps hitting him, when he's joking/messing around? i think it's meant to be funny, but i found it annoying? i mean i dont even know anymore. the writing quality seems noobish and amateurish. it's just how the story is told and structured that's make it like that. total score 3/5 becuz readable but wouldn't recommend unless u have nothing else to read or just wanna waste time. plus the lemon scene wasn't even that's great, imagine a retarded idiot losing virginity and that's how i felt about the lemon, couldnt even get a hardon.... but w/e. words to author: I know this review might hurt your ego but i hope you respect my opinion about your book and continue to improve your writing skills and maybe one day you will release a good novel for me to enjoy. Also if u see this, you can let me know if the story get better or not and i might continue reading.