I read about 80 chaps and couldnt continue to read anymore as the mc was an idiot/retard/unrealistic. idk, if author think making mc idiot and retarded some type of comedy but it was more annoying than comedic. I also don't get why main wife keeps hitting him, when he's joking/messing around? i think it's meant to be funny, but i found it annoying? i mean i dont even know anymore. the writing quality seems noobish and amateurish. it's just how the story is told and structured that's make it like that. total score 3/5 becuz readable but wouldn't recommend unless u have nothing else to read or just wanna waste time. plus the lemon scene wasn't even that's great, imagine a retarded idiot losing virginity and that's how i felt about the lemon, couldnt even get a hardon.... but w/e. words to author: I know this review might hurt your ego but i hope you respect my opinion about your book and continue to improve your writing skills and maybe one day you will release a good novel for me to enjoy. Also if u see this, you can let me know if the story get better or not and i might continue reading.
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Liked it!
LIKE